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for Emile Pinet's Abracadabra Rhyme Poetry Contest;

POTD July 2024

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My eyes to something beautiful are drawn
up past the peaks where clouds of pink are swirled.
I take up my pen seeing her again.
It’s the Enchantress Spring I look upon.
She stands with long hair streaming in the wind
of a glorious, bright, beautiful dawn
as the temperate breeze embraces her.
She banishes harsh days. Winter is gone!
Bird song and lushness she conjures the world.
Seeing her again, I take up my pen
to capture all the magic Spring brings on.

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Ink Empress

Date: 8/16/2024 10:26:00 PM

Still one of my faves for this form! I really enjoyed this one sweet andrea! Congratulations on your win

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/15/2024 1:41:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea! Your amazing poem "Enchantress Spring" has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem easily earned you a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done, my friend Emile.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/30/2024 5:48:00 AM

What a brilliant write Andrea! :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/26/2024 5:04:00 AM

Andrea, even though it's summer and hot, traces of spring still appear if we know where to look. There's always magic to be found by those who know where to look. Your words, for example. Smiling I am.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/25/2024 9:17:00 AM

Lots of imagery and color my friend in your poem. Timeless Twilight a well written with great flow. Congratulations on poem of the day. Blessings your way

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/25/2024 12:59:00 PM

thanks for telling me this. I did not know I got POTD

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/25/2024 6:23:00 AM

Seamlessly perfect, Andrea:)

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/23/2024 8:14:00 AM

Perfection for this form! I love it! Xo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2024 3:37:00 AM

A very inviting poem that says come read and get a vision of lovely spring. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Tonye George

Date: 7/22/2024 2:17:00 AM

I love the personification and alliterations. You have written this so nicely dear, Andrea. "I take up my pen seeing her again. It’s the Enchantress Spring I look upon. She stands with long hair streaming in the wind." We want to Ink down these beautiful moments when we see them. Life of the poet. Best wishes in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/22/2024 3:19:00 PM

Thanks for your comments to me , Tonye.

Jim Slaughter

Date: 7/21/2024 10:43:00 AM

She certainly "enchants" me time and time again. Beautiful imagery, Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/22/2024 3:19:00 PM

Thanks, Jim

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/21/2024 9:28:00 AM

How can I not admire the magic your words weave, despite the complicated but great rhymes? You will always be number one. Hugs.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/22/2024 3:20:00 PM

Awww you are too sweet.

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/21/2024 5:47:00 AM

beautiful imagery, of the enchanteress spring, nicely done, enjoyed

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/22/2024 3:20:00 PM

Thanks, Yann

Ink Empress

Date: 7/21/2024 12:43:00 AM

Wow the cadence and the way youv woven words here is so lyrical and beautiful! I love the opening lines and the rest just flows seamlessly with your opening! I want to try write like that. So beautiful! And catchy. Magic of spring you surely do capture with your artistic pen sweet andrea! Love this! Best wishes! A fave this is for me

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/22/2024 3:21:00 PM

Thanks so much. The form is a bit tricky but I am glad I tried it. You should too