Enchantment

Ripples of billowy cloud enchantment
                       Mix with my deepest desires
                  I hold the green of the mountain secure
              And cast the clouds upon my surface
           Twining colors melt together by my gentle caress
           A boat’s passage swirls my layers
              Of sky dancing with clouds in a waltz
                  Then disappear into the receding shore
                        I smooth my inner depths of you
                            Before once more enchantment is at my door


10-18-2019
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Jeanne McGee 2019
San Pedro, Guatemala
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Faulkner Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 6:39 PM
This does weave a spell of enchantment, like the Caribbean sea-
Krutsinger Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 2:29 PM
Well done; lots of imagery that takes me outside myself into enchantment.
Gauthier Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 9:48 AM
Lovely, Jeanne.
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