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Enchantment-Duo-Rhyme

"Enchantment - Duo-Rhyme" brilliant beams of Sunlight cascade to orange aura marmalade enhancing love while blooming new beneath cream skies of patent blue sprinkling words sweet as dawning's dew two turtledoves in wings which coo fond melodies caress adieu' in magic moments rendezvous frolicked in fields of heather's hue fake hearts faded to vapor's view soft silver stars shed tears parade enchanted moonlight mist charade'. *For Andrea Dietrich's Duo-Rhyme Contest

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 2:05:00 AM

a beautiful poem, ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2012 1:39:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2012 10:45:00 AM

A well deserved placement for you in the Duo-Rhyme contest. Congratulations Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/5/2012 12:52:00 PM

Such an enchanting write, Linda-Marie! Just beautiful!! Congrats on another wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Joseph May

Date: 8/4/2012 10:54:00 AM

congrats on your win Linda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/4/2012 8:58:00 AM

WON 4th place ... thankxxx..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/4/2012 6:32:00 AM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/4/2012 4:01:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on a well deserved win.xx

David Williams

Date: 8/4/2012 2:21:00 AM

Linda-Marie congrats on your win, just love it....David

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/4/2012 12:26:00 AM

Congratulations on this colorful and indeed enchanting piece garner a well deserved win. I hope you are feeling much better soon. Blessings

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/3/2012 7:33:00 PM

As always, just beautiful in every line! Lovely poem, Linda Marie! Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2012 7:02:00 PM

How are you feeling today, by the way?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2012 7:01:00 PM

Linda, you sure had a lot of savory lines in this poem. Enchanting as its title!! My favorite was "cream skies of patent blue!" and the marmalade line too. Thanks for coming up with such a sweet example of Duo rhyme for my contest and Big congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea

Jack Horne

Date: 7/16/2012 12:55:00 PM

what a beautiful piece - Andrea will love it

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/13/2012 8:53:00 PM

Very beautiful. Oh I didn't know you had a concussion. Wow , I hope your well. :•( very sad to hear this. Wishing you good Heath. Luv n hugs Michael. Ps please rest and get be better.

Tanya Harrington

Date: 7/13/2012 1:39:00 PM

Oh so beautiful! I float in clouded skies to watch this work come alive! :) Tanya p.s. I do hope you are feeling better!

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/12/2012 2:50:00 PM

You have supplied an excellent example of what Andrea is looking for in her contest. This is very well written.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2012 2:28:00 PM

Reads like winning work..Good luck in the contest...Thanks for stopping by..We are all fair..Doris has her lasar surgery next week..My husband is facing spinal surgery again..Sara

Cory Long

Date: 7/12/2012 5:20:00 AM

You have a way with words buddy loved it! cory

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/11/2012 7:16:00 PM

As always, a beautiful poem from you, that isn't always easy when trying a new form! Nicely done, Linda Marie!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/11/2012 5:25:00 PM

A lovely write, Linda-Marie. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/11/2012 4:36:00 PM

Did not see that Andrea had a contest going. Good luck in the contest. Just wanted to check in and see how you are feeling. Hope all is well. love phyl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2012 1:34:00 PM

It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Linda-Marie and the best to you in Andrea's contest. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/11/2012 11:26:00 AM

You have yet again created an atomically radiant write my friend! I really enjoyed the awesomeness, the powerful words of your incredible poem! Thank you for sharing this illustrious piece of art Linda-Marie! Terrific poem, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2012 9:46:00 AM

You have a beautiful poem here Linda-Marie....sweet as marmalade...super rhyme...luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise