Enchanted Forest

ENCHANTED FOREST enchanted forest one deer at the meadow brook bare feet on tiptoe

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Jack Horne

Date: 12/4/2011 3:41:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Daver

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/15/2011 9:03:00 AM

I want to see, too! Big Smiles. (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 11/15/2011 2:57:00 AM

This one had a soothing effect on me. Great write, sir.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2011 11:16:00 PM

oh, I really like THIS haiku. Way to do a haiku, DAver!!

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/14/2011 3:28:00 PM

Question is..? is even if they are bare feet..! they could belong to a bear,,a bear on tip-toe...oh.! who knows...i barely ever to the forest go, well...(you know) they brook no opposition as bears go..! (enjoyed this lovely Haiku write Daver:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2011 4:25:00 PM

wow, I really enjoy this one and the way you spaced the last line for effect, Daver. Enchanted indeed! well, you are my last comment here today. Time to post and get to making dinner. Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2011 12:51:00 PM

Good afternoon Daver,, don't give me a shotgun...lol..kidding I love deers.. I'll be tippy toeing.. Near my Meadows.... But not bare.... Enjoyed,..p.d

Date: 11/13/2011 12:05:00 PM

The scene comes alive through your words. Thank you for sharing them with us. Karen

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/13/2011 11:14:00 AM

I really like this one, Daver :) Really made me feel like tiptoeing myself :D I hope all is well with you :) hugs!

Mathias Yakubu

Date: 11/13/2011 10:54:00 AM

Wonderful pictorial describtion...a forest enchanted and a dear.. Austin.. Good work. Mathy

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 11/13/2011 10:46:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku Daver! I believe I have seen that deer before, probably in my back yard. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl