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Empty Room

An empty room fills my thought, a love not found, though I sought. Broken heart left naked bare, all alone just standing there. Cruel is love when not equal, one leaves strong, other left feeble. Dreams not shared, between the two, hopes are dashed for me and you. Now this bridge I try to mend, for I need more than just a friend. You've destroyed the bridge I built, and broke my heart with no guilt. So I'm left with broken pieces, while empty room, the space increases. 10/11/18

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Date: 1/6/2019 10:09:00 AM
Well penned, Wren. Congrats on your top win.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/6/2019 3:35:00 PM
Thank you Line!
Date: 1/4/2019 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Wren! :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/4/2019 3:48:00 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 1/4/2019 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Wren. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/4/2019 3:47:00 PM
Thank you Eve for your kind words and have a blessed day.
Date: 1/4/2019 8:30:00 AM
Broken heart left naked bare, all alone just standing there.— This is so skillfully done that it hurts. Well done and congratulations!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/4/2019 9:04:00 AM
Thank you P.S. have a blessed day.
Date: 10/26/2018 5:41:00 AM
I found this to be a very fine expression of the woes coming from unrequited love. A pleasure to read..
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/26/2018 6:12:00 AM
Thank you Robert for your kind comments have a blessed day.
Date: 10/11/2018 7:20:00 AM
A painfully hard situation that you've penned here; well done.
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Date: 10/11/2018 5:52:00 AM
"love is cruel when not equal" - so true! The last line is interesting, because it really brings the whole poem "home". Well done, Wren.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/11/2018 6:21:00 AM
Thanks Caren. enjoy your day
Date: 10/10/2018 11:46:00 PM
Empty room is full with chaos mind, unstable and flirting love!- nice sonnet
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/11/2018 6:22:00 AM
Thank you very much Mahtab!

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