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Silvery gauze rises Fills the hollow and woods Blessings from the rain clouds Little they're understood Cool is the air and damp Gift from Savior above The artist paints the sky Fills my heart with His love Whispy clouds suspended Manna from above Colors shades unending Magnifies His love The sun rises golden Illuminating gray clouds Reducing some shading Mostly gray silver shroud Soon heat will overtake The dew evaporate Will blessings be forgotten As food fills empty plate

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Date: 3/29/2014 9:03:00 AM
Sara Such a descriptive and heartfelt write. The imagery pulls the reader into this poem with a great message. Thanks for the lovely comment on my Yellow Treat poem.
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Date: 6/4/2012 8:44:00 PM
So much nice imagery in this one, Sara. You are ever creating from the world around you!
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Date: 6/4/2012 8:15:00 AM
love the imagery in this write, my friend
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Date: 6/3/2012 12:56:00 PM
very colourful poetry. I love it.
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Date: 6/2/2012 2:33:00 PM
Very well described Sara, with an important message..)
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Date: 6/2/2012 4:36:00 AM
beautiful imagery sara, and such excellent creative poetry always puts a smile on my face. *Smiles* Ron
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Date: 6/2/2012 4:32:00 AM
this is truly a beautiful poetic masterpiece, Sara, you really know how to transfer the reader to you anbd what you write. harry
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Date: 6/1/2012 12:42:00 PM
Love the several images here in your poem Sara..Love how your poetry is soothing to my soul.
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