Empty Nest

Empty Nest
Norma Evans Barber
11-29-10

The silence of a quiet nest
Surrounds me
As I sit at the sink
Chewing on my probiotic pomegranate seeds
Blood red and juicy,
Severing with my tongue seed from seed
Through and around bridge cavities, 
Bunching groups of tasteless seeds together
To the left side of my mouth.
Yes, it’s an art!
I release with one big suck and swallow
The juice blocked away on the right, 
Then with one strong swoosh
Eject bundled lumps of pits into the trash.
I feel—sheer mind over matter—
The juice purify my under scalp
And think how beneficial it must be
To have juicy red blood
Sanitize my brain.

Is my retreat to sensory eating
Symptomatic of our communication barrier?
Or an indication 
That years have rolled by us
Leaving age, and self, and
Peculiar quirks
That cause me to believe
The dream of growing old together and loving it
Is just for us and many more
A myth, a mirage, a dream?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 17, 2026 at 11:59 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 25, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Norma, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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July 28, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Norma, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Take Care. **SKAT**
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