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Empty Nest

I watched the last fledglings taking flight At first, each struggled against the wind, Without fear, facing their first bleak night I watched the last fledglings taking flight. Wishing elders might’ve feared their plight, When into cloudy skies their children send, I watched the last fledglings taking flight At first, each struggled against the wind.
Written September 23, 2022

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Date: 9/24/2022 4:29:00 AM
Milt, this is so beautiful and a lovely metaphor for the struggle so many face! Constructed so well, it is an absolute joy to read!! Happy Saturday!!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/24/2022 8:22:00 AM
Thanks, Mike. Happy Saturday to you, too! I hope you have a marvelous weekend doing all the things you enjoy.

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