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Empty House

Empty House Weather beaten, sun-baked Rickety, rackety siding, Falling apart, worn of age Tucked away midst bushes and brambles, Rattling windows and dusty ledges Battled the cold wintry breeze. The sun porch protected the old frame From harsh prairie winds and snow. The wood box inside the porch was always full, Now empty, overcome by cob-webs and moths, Painted walls, seasoned with smoke From the wood-burning stove and pipes Rays of sunlight now light the room. I seem to hear the sound of a kettle sputtering On a well-stoked fire, Mingled with the fresh aroma of coffee. Creaky, scuffed up old carpet marks Ah, Sunday gatherings, Christmas, Dad read the Bible round the family circle. Sunflower seeds fell lavishly, roasted and all! Games –“fruit basket upset!” They dashed for mom’s round chair, I remember the pile of spokes! Glued and fixed it sat once again, Restored, by the old bouker stove - The warmth, I feel it yet! Glancing over the threshold where the kerosene lamp Once sat, casting a dim ray of light. An old bed post, a torn mattress – Only cast a haunting shadow of yesterday. The living room carpet, now well worn, The old wooden rocker in the corner – Mom’s oasis from tiring years, Upstairs, the rooms, the noise – laughter, Squeaky stairs – how well I remember! All these – a barrage of memories dear, In the empty house. Susan Fox

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/7/2018 2:57:00 AM
Susan, you have described my childhood home. The thing that amazed me when I went back was how low the railings were to the ground. When my twin and I used to play pirates, and jump up on that railing, I could have sworn it was 30 feet in the air, and it is probably around 3. Thank you for writing a poem that brought me back to child-hood me! Well done, my friend.
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Date: 1/19/2018 11:44:00 AM
Susan Fox, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Susan Fox
Date: 1/19/2018 7:21:00 PM
thank you for your gracious comment!
Date: 1/17/2018 6:36:00 PM
Strong memories led to a beautiful poem. The imagery is too good. I almost feel as if I've Seen the house. Very nice
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Date: 1/17/2018 4:56:00 AM
Wonderful, delightful poem. The nostalgic rhythm is so endearing. Welcome to our PS community, Susan. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Susan Fox
Date: 1/17/2018 1:26:00 PM
thank you
Date: 1/10/2018 4:49:00 PM
Excellent first post Susan, you write very well.. Welcome to poetry soup...
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Susan Fox
Date: 1/17/2018 1:27:00 PM
thank you

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