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Empty As the Hourglass Shatters

Empty as the hourglass shatters, then falls Upon the floor of love forevermore To feel sad eyes weeping from eyelid walls Close tight from love's dark realms of shades abused When seeing shadows flee the open door To fill the saddest eyes of love recused These painful orbs will stare through shades of blue With memories from love known once before In its vivid detail when love was new Now, broken glass, to cause the eyes to pour 6/8/18 contest Rhyme Time 4--10 lines Poetry

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Date: 6/30/2018 10:48:00 AM
Back with a Great Big Congratulations on your great 1st place win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/29/2018 9:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Frederic - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-)
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your $1 win with this sad and well-written poem. Mine was along the same lines as yours but yours is so eloquent. :)
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:47:00 AM
as beautiful as you are dear poet, thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)
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Date: 6/10/2018 6:08:00 PM
Very well done, Frederic. This is a contest of Laura's I am really looking forward to trying and I see it really inspired great work from you. I find Constance's themes inspired much of my best work as well!
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Date: 6/9/2018 3:04:00 PM
Beautifully written Frederic. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 6/9/2018 8:24:00 AM
Frederic, beautifully sad love poem and the music is sublime, best of luck ~
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:58:00 PM
love the sad poetic verse, Frederic, Good luck in the contest.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:25:00 PM
Times up...hopefully, it was beautiful while it lasted... Nice write...All the best Frederic
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