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Empty Apartment

It's the 16th Floor, 302F do not you worry, you'll love it a whole lot. I can see your hesitation, but u'll see, this is the perfect one. Here we are, white door with his favourite, brass nameplate reading, Woodsmist in gooseberry black. On the left is the balcony and bedroom is on your right. In front you see, is the kitchen i used and above is the chantelier we brought, the day we made love. I know you like the place, from your sparkling grey eyes. I know you love my darling house, But, you must know why am selling it so cheap. It was my nest, with me and my love. We sung in the balcony, dined in here. When i cooked in the kitchen, he kissed my neck, holding my waist. Our nights and holidays were our bedroom's delight. I was thee and thee, mine. All i cared was him and my nest but, today all i have is this Empty Apartment. Neither do i have love nor i seek any. He left me alone, with a skylark unknown. He said he loved me and gifted me a memory. I smiled and thanked shouted and wept, But all am left with is me and this Empty Apartment. Now, Ma'am you know, why am selling it so. For now i don't have the one to sing or cook with me nor hug or kiss me. Lets go back and sign the deal Vastu says its the right time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/28/2010 9:15:00 AM
THANKSSSSSSS A LOT PETER :D no one has ever given me such a complement! m highly obliged :D
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Date: 12/27/2010 4:30:00 AM
No one can fail to read it twice. It will be a memorable poetic apartment I deem. Peter Onyancha
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Date: 12/16/2010 5:22:00 AM
Thank You everyone :D I m really glad that you all liked my poem :) I love this site...can learn a lot...I will try Deboraj to write something worthy :D
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Date: 12/13/2010 1:26:00 PM
Nice touchy and yet humorous write with nice salesmanship quality, Utpala.
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Date: 12/13/2010 12:09:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Utpala. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2010 12:05:00 PM
Beautiful write.Nice flow.Best of luck for the contest-kashinath
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Date: 12/13/2010 10:16:00 AM
Fine write & sad! I have experienced this too! Please consider writing for my Conest Winter Holy Days, if you could give us a verse on Pancha Ganapati or Eid ul Adha?Pick some topic from the Contest list and write one? Light & Love
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