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Empathy

Elderly neighbour Her eyes flecked with humility Her reclusive stare that neutralizes wisdom (perhaps an unexplored depth of fear) Nothing much spoken between us beyond "good morning" No words of pre-sliced acceptance No unguarded thoughts to take us in a different direction Uncharted territory in her peek through the door An eerie sense of communion Still I shovel her snow Pity for the empty cradle of old age Pity for what feels like a failure of love my rush to fill the gaps between us Maybe I need any relationship beyond my look in the mirror Barren lines of futility fallen shadows on winter's fertile ground Poem composed: July 23rd, 2020 (revised Jan 2nd/22)

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Date: 2/11/2021 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" story/write. It is great to do something for others. Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/11/2021 2:19:00 PM
Hello Paula Your kind words on Poetrysoup.com are small gems. Many thanks. Be well. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 2/11/2021 1:19:00 AM
This was really a moving poem.I am glad I read this. Congratulations on your win.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/11/2021 6:35:00 AM
My appreciation for your thoughtful remarks. Thank you for dropping by. Best regards, Brian
Date: 2/10/2021 7:02:00 PM
Ah! Edward’s contest has indeed brought out these gems! What a superb write! Better titled Empathy instead of Sympathy, in my opinion ... congrats on your top win! God bless!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/10/2021 8:10:00 PM
What a superb suggestion! Thank you for that. I will change the title. I value your thoughtful comments. Much appreciated, Brian
Date: 2/10/2021 1:18:00 PM
Nice to discover this excellent poem, Brian:-) Congrats for placing in my contest!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/10/2021 1:55:00 PM
Thank you for sponsoring such an intriguing contest, Edward. A poem submission with no comments, no reader reaction was certainly an interesting twist (+ enticement) to super contests. Best wishes, Brian

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