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Emotions of My Soul - Part 2

It surely wasn't the first time and definitely was not the last cascading down upon me drenching my soul so very fast Perfect orbs of wonder searching past my blue holding true emotions reveal a being that is you It wasn't trust that I was grasping or love I wished to steal I was living in your goodness and life's meaning I could feel A wholeness to this madness a dagger to kill the pain held up for just a moment giving a heartbeat to the strain Wash away this darkness shed light on a gasping soul spill your aura from the heavens the one for whom the church bell tolls When the sparrows break the hilltop and encircle the waning day be the one who listens to the treetops as they sway

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Date: 10/30/2016 12:28:00 AM
Beautiful, I liked the use of the word "orbs" as I came across this reading a very interesting book!
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Date: 10/28/2016 1:18:00 PM
A very lilting and enchanting poem, Tim. It dances and sways w/rhythm. Nicely done, sir. Love and more love to you. RW
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Date: 10/27/2016 6:45:00 AM
Excellent. A hint of sorrow is shown with emotions. Lovely write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 10/26/2016 4:54:00 PM
ohh, i feel the pain... enchantingly beautiful, tim!..huggs
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2016 6:29:00 PM
Thanks much nette
Date: 10/26/2016 2:50:00 PM
Its lovely to listen to tree-tops sway..and to live in others kindness..Im sure there are plenty of more kind people who can make us feel better.and even if you live in the kindness within your soul... Loved this.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2016 6:29:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. I do believe you are right.
Date: 10/26/2016 1:14:00 PM
Malloncollie days sometimes come around and like you I have one today and it might be the book I'm reading Fablehaven by Brandon Mull
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2016 1:22:00 PM
Thanks Eve...I will have to check that one out.
Date: 10/26/2016 11:21:00 AM
She must have really been special, Tim. Beautiful poetry but I feel a little sadness.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2016 6:27:00 PM
Barely
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/26/2016 2:53:00 PM
You mean you can read?
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2016 11:27:00 AM
Really not much sadness, just reflecting on a rainy day. Could be the book I'm reading "The Prettiest Feathers" : )

Book: Reflection on the Important Things