Skat A Poet Rhyme

Emotionless

EMOTIONLESS

By morning wake
When the light in my face
I'm reminded of your disgrace!

How can I do this to myself?
How do I wish Calgon would take me away?
Will I ever wake like the melody of the Blue Jay?

What am I suppose to do?
Shut myself down from this misery?
Emotionless, because I am too weak to be strong

It's my fault for inviting
-he that dropped my heart from cloud nine
Well, I have nothing else to say.
Except, "life has no meaning, and here I am GONE!"
Emotionless

SKAT

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Tamara M. Kohlstaedt May 8, 2016 at 12:32 AM Extremely insightful - but though we at times hide or lock away our emotions we still have them! Remember the Vulcans LOL :)

Fullmoon Sway January 23, 2016 at 8:52 PM i love the poem:)

Robyn Campbell January 3, 2016 at 9:30 AM As usual, a beautiful write. Powerful and full of emotion. XOXO

Mark Mason October 12, 2015 at 10:24 PM Great and yet understandable.. Emotional but still 'emotionless'

Victoria Georgieva September 12, 2015 at 8:00 AM Oh, hey, It's not good to be emotionless, dear, but anyway, a very nice write!

Constance La France September 3, 2015 at 11:03 AM Skat, such deep sad emotions penned, I felt the pain and thanks for visiting my poem, dark days ... ~~

Anmol Samal May 5, 2015 at 2:17 AM a very beautiful poem SKAT....nice reading it....

M. Shahid H. Chouhdry August 26, 2014 at 10:34 AM Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination

Mel Merrill June 11, 2014 at 3:47 AM Hey girl, waas up? Great write from sometime ago, but I hadn't read it, so...I imagine you're tucked safely and warmly in a healthy relationship by now--I hope so. If not, misery loves company, so come on by :) SKAT, you rock my world...xxx...Mel :)

Vincent Flannery February 26, 2014 at 7:04 PM We are built upon the experiences of our life. And so it may be hard at times, in the end it makes us who we are. So never ever give up or you'll miss a great ending. Always enjoy reading your poems. Take care always.

Sammi Walden February 3, 2014 at 12:03 PM I love this poem and thank you for the comment on mine x

Denise Retro November 11, 2013 at 7:46 AM ENJOYING YOUR POETRY>>> life goes on for sure! good job on this poem

Robin Davis September 30, 2013 at 8:05 AM SKAT There is an important message in here that love will find you and life doesn't stop. Full of emotion and feeling. nice job

Gerald Kithinji September 16, 2013 at 9:38 AM ...and the life goes on...everyday, everywhere. Got you, loud and clear.

Kelly Deschler August 22, 2013 at 5:05 PM Very true! I loved this poem, SKAT! Well done! I can also relate to your feelings in this poem. I have many poems similar to this, I just haven't gotten to post them yet. Thank you once again for the kind comments on my poem "If I Died Now". It really means a lot!

Karl Eivers July 4, 2013 at 11:23 AM true shit

Colleen Bono May 19, 2013 at 10:37 PM nicely stated.thanks for the visit.happy days to you and family.take care

Yours Truly April 22, 2013 at 1:07 AM I love this poem skat :) it was well written and the vibe was sad but it was real. That's what I think is important that I can tell it was a real emotional writing. Thanks for sharing it was great vision food! -Yours Truly

Betty Bateson April 17, 2013 at 9:09 AM There is romance and love out there. It will find you. Lovely poem. Betty

Charmaine Chircop January 9, 2013 at 11:52 PM you wull wake up to the melody of the blue jay dear.Sad and beautiful

John Castro November 28, 2011 at 1:46 PM sometimes its hard to cry

Cory Long June 10, 2011 at 2:24 PM this was so beautifully written. cory

Nazie Kimbrity May 31, 2011 at 4:19 AM I really liked it. I do agree that life goes on everyday

Julie Heckman January 2, 2011 at 7:01 PM Funny you should mention it... I was just thinking about shooting myself today, it was after attending a writers workship! I hope your emotionlessness doesn't last forever. Julie

Lucinda Bulger December 31, 2010 at 8:07 PM yes, life goes on, well written piece, although life goes on "every day", perhaps until we breathe no more... I tend to take things literal, forgive me. Cindy

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