Emotionless

EMOTIONLESS By morning wake When the light in my face I'm reminded of your disgrace! How can I do this to myself? How do I wish Calgon would take me away? Will I ever wake like the melody of the Blue Jay? What am I suppose to do? Shut myself down from this misery? Emotionless, because I am too weak to be strong It's my fault for inviting -he that dropped my heart from cloud nine Well, I have nothing else to say. Except, "life has no meaning, and here I am GONE!" Emotionless SKAT

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Tamara M. Kohlstaedt

Date: 5/8/2016 12:32:00 AM

Extremely insightful - but though we at times hide or lock away our emotions we still have them! Remember the Vulcans LOL :)

Fullmoon Sway

Date: 1/23/2016 8:52:00 PM

i love the poem:)

Robyn Campbell

Date: 1/3/2016 9:30:00 AM

As usual, a beautiful write. Powerful and full of emotion. XOXO

Mark Mason

Date: 10/12/2015 10:24:00 PM

Great and yet understandable.. Emotional but still 'emotionless'

Victoria Georgieva

Date: 9/12/2015 8:00:00 AM

Oh, hey, It's not good to be emotionless, dear, but anyway, a very nice write!

Constance La France

Date: 9/3/2015 11:03:00 AM

Skat, such deep sad emotions penned, I felt the pain and thanks for visiting my poem, dark days ... ~~

Anmol Samal

Date: 5/5/2015 2:17:00 AM

a very beautiful poem SKAT....nice reading it....

M. Shahid H. Chouhdry

Date: 8/26/2014 10:34:00 AM

Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination

Mel Merrill

Date: 6/11/2014 3:47:00 AM

Hey girl, waas up? Great write from sometime ago, but I hadn't read it, so...I imagine you're tucked safely and warmly in a healthy relationship by now--I hope so. If not, misery loves company, so come on by :) SKAT, you rock my world...xxx...Mel :)

Vincent Flannery

Date: 2/26/2014 7:04:00 PM

We are built upon the experiences of our life. And so it may be hard at times, in the end it makes us who we are. So never ever give up or you'll miss a great ending. Always enjoy reading your poems. Take care always.

Sammi Walden

Date: 2/3/2014 12:03:00 PM

I love this poem and thank you for the comment on mine x

Denise Retro

Date: 11/11/2013 7:46:00 AM

ENJOYING YOUR POETRY>>> life goes on for sure! good job on this poem

Robin Davis

Date: 9/30/2013 8:05:00 AM

SKAT There is an important message in here that love will find you and life doesn't stop. Full of emotion and feeling. nice job

Gerald Kithinji

Date: 9/16/2013 9:38:00 AM

...and the life goes on...everyday, everywhere. Got you, loud and clear.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/22/2013 5:05:00 PM

Very true! I loved this poem, SKAT! Well done! I can also relate to your feelings in this poem. I have many poems similar to this, I just haven't gotten to post them yet. Thank you once again for the kind comments on my poem "If I Died Now". It really means a lot!

Karl Eivers

Date: 7/4/2013 11:23:00 AM

true shit

Colleen Bono

Date: 5/19/2013 10:37:00 PM

nicely stated.thanks for the visit.happy days to you and family.take care

Yours Truly

Date: 4/22/2013 1:07:00 AM

I love this poem skat :) it was well written and the vibe was sad but it was real. That's what I think is important that I can tell it was a real emotional writing. Thanks for sharing it was great vision food! -Yours Truly

Betty Bateson

Date: 4/17/2013 9:09:00 AM

There is romance and love out there. It will find you. Lovely poem. Betty

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/9/2013 11:52:00 PM

you wull wake up to the melody of the blue jay dear.Sad and beautiful

John Castro

Date: 11/28/2011 1:46:00 PM

sometimes its hard to cry

Cory Long

Date: 6/10/2011 2:24:00 PM

this was so beautifully written. cory

Nazie Kimbrity

Date: 5/31/2011 4:19:00 AM

I really liked it. I do agree that life goes on everyday

Julie Heckman

Date: 1/2/2011 7:01:00 PM

Funny you should mention it... I was just thinking about shooting myself today, it was after attending a writers workship! I hope your emotionlessness doesn't last forever. Julie

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 12/31/2010 8:07:00 PM

yes, life goes on, well written piece, although life goes on "every day", perhaps until we breathe no more... I tend to take things literal, forgive me. Cindy