Emotionless

EMOTIONLESS

By morning wake
When the light in my face
I'm reminded of your disgrace!

How can I do this to myself?
How do I wish Calgon would take me away?
Will I ever wake like the melody of the Blue Jay?

What am I suppose to do?
Shut myself down from this misery?
Emotionless, because I am too weak to be strong

It's my fault for inviting
-he that dropped my heart from cloud nine
Well, I have nothing else to say.
Except, "life has no meaning, and here I am GONE!"
Emotionless

SKAT

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/8/2016 12:32:00 AM
Extremely insightful - but though we at times hide or lock away our emotions we still have them! Remember the Vulcans LOL :)
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Date: 1/23/2016 8:52:00 PM
i love the poem:)
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Date: 1/3/2016 9:30:00 AM
As usual, a beautiful write. Powerful and full of emotion. XOXO
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Date: 10/12/2015 10:24:00 PM
Great and yet understandable.. Emotional but still 'emotionless'
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Date: 9/12/2015 8:00:00 AM
Oh, hey, It's not good to be emotionless, dear, but anyway, a very nice write!
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Date: 9/3/2015 11:03:00 AM
Skat, such deep sad emotions penned, I felt the pain and thanks for visiting my poem, dark days ... ~~
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Date: 5/5/2015 2:17:00 AM
a very beautiful poem SKAT....nice reading it....
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Date: 8/26/2014 10:34:00 AM
Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination
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Date: 6/11/2014 3:47:00 AM
Hey girl, waas up? Great write from sometime ago, but I hadn't read it, so...I imagine you're tucked safely and warmly in a healthy relationship by now--I hope so. If not, misery loves company, so come on by :) SKAT, you rock my world...xxx...Mel :)
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Date: 2/26/2014 7:04:00 PM
We are built upon the experiences of our life. And so it may be hard at times, in the end it makes us who we are. So never ever give up or you'll miss a great ending. Always enjoy reading your poems. Take care always.
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Date: 2/3/2014 12:03:00 PM
I love this poem and thank you for the comment on mine x
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Date: 11/11/2013 7:46:00 AM
ENJOYING YOUR POETRY>>> life goes on for sure! good job on this poem
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:05:00 AM
SKAT There is an important message in here that love will find you and life doesn't stop. Full of emotion and feeling. nice job
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Date: 9/16/2013 9:38:00 AM
...and the life goes on...everyday, everywhere. Got you, loud and clear.
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Date: 8/22/2013 5:05:00 PM
Very true! I loved this poem, SKAT! Well done! I can also relate to your feelings in this poem. I have many poems similar to this, I just haven't gotten to post them yet. Thank you once again for the kind comments on my poem "If I Died Now". It really means a lot!
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Date: 7/4/2013 11:23:00 AM
true shit
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Date: 5/19/2013 10:37:00 PM
nicely stated.thanks for the visit.happy days to you and family.take care
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Date: 4/22/2013 1:07:00 AM
I love this poem skat :) it was well written and the vibe was sad but it was real. That's what I think is important that I can tell it was a real emotional writing. Thanks for sharing it was great vision food! -Yours Truly
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Date: 4/17/2013 9:09:00 AM
There is romance and love out there. It will find you. Lovely poem. Betty
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Date: 1/9/2013 11:52:00 PM
you wull wake up to the melody of the blue jay dear.Sad and beautiful
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Date: 11/28/2011 1:46:00 PM
sometimes its hard to cry
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Date: 6/10/2011 2:24:00 PM
this was so beautifully written. cory
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:19:00 AM
I really liked it. I do agree that life goes on everyday
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Date: 1/2/2011 7:01:00 PM
Funny you should mention it... I was just thinking about shooting myself today, it was after attending a writers workship! I hope your emotionlessness doesn't last forever. Julie
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Date: 12/31/2010 8:07:00 PM
yes, life goes on, well written piece, although life goes on "every day", perhaps until we breathe no more... I tend to take things literal, forgive me. Cindy
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