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Emotionless

EMOTIONLESS

By morning wake
When the light in my face
I'm reminded of your disgrace!

How can I do this to myself?
How do I wish Calgon would take me away?
Will I ever wake like the melody of the Blue Jay?

What am I suppose to do?
Shut myself down from this misery?
Emotionless, because I am too weak to be strong

It's my fault for inviting
-he that dropped my heart from cloud nine
Well, I have nothing else to say.
Except, "life has no meaning, and here I am GONE!"
Emotionless

SKAT

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Tamara M. Kohlstaedt Date: 5/8/2016 12:32:00 AM Extremely insightful - but though we at times hide or lock away our emotions we still have them! Remember the Vulcans LOL :) Login to Reply

Fullmoon Sway Date: 1/23/2016 8:52:00 PM i love the poem:) Login to Reply

Robyn Campbell Date: 1/3/2016 9:30:00 AM As usual, a beautiful write. Powerful and full of emotion. XOXO Login to Reply

Mark Mason Date: 10/12/2015 10:24:00 PM Great and yet understandable.. Emotional but still 'emotionless' Login to Reply

Victoria Georgieva Date: 9/12/2015 8:00:00 AM Oh, hey, It's not good to be emotionless, dear, but anyway, a very nice write! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 9/3/2015 11:03:00 AM Skat, such deep sad emotions penned, I felt the pain and thanks for visiting my poem, dark days ... ~~ Login to Reply

Anmol Samal Date: 5/5/2015 2:17:00 AM a very beautiful poem SKAT....nice reading it.... Login to Reply

M. Shahid H. Chouhdry Date: 8/26/2014 10:34:00 AM Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination Login to Reply

Mel Merrill Date: 6/11/2014 3:47:00 AM Hey girl, waas up? Great write from sometime ago, but I hadn't read it, so...I imagine you're tucked safely and warmly in a healthy relationship by now--I hope so. If not, misery loves company, so come on by :) SKAT, you rock my world...xxx...Mel :) Login to Reply

Vincent Flannery Date: 2/26/2014 7:04:00 PM We are built upon the experiences of our life. And so it may be hard at times, in the end it makes us who we are. So never ever give up or you'll miss a great ending. Always enjoy reading your poems. Take care always. Login to Reply

Sammi Walden Date: 2/3/2014 12:03:00 PM I love this poem and thank you for the comment on mine x Login to Reply

Denise Retro Date: 11/11/2013 7:46:00 AM ENJOYING YOUR POETRY>>> life goes on for sure! good job on this poem Login to Reply

Robin Davis Date: 9/30/2013 8:05:00 AM SKAT There is an important message in here that love will find you and life doesn't stop. Full of emotion and feeling. nice job Login to Reply

Gerald Kithinji Date: 9/16/2013 9:38:00 AM ...and the life goes on...everyday, everywhere. Got you, loud and clear. Login to Reply

Kelly Deschler Date: 8/22/2013 5:05:00 PM Very true! I loved this poem, SKAT! Well done! I can also relate to your feelings in this poem. I have many poems similar to this, I just haven't gotten to post them yet. Thank you once again for the kind comments on my poem "If I Died Now". It really means a lot! Login to Reply

Karl Eivers Date: 7/4/2013 11:23:00 AM true shit Login to Reply

Colleen Bono Date: 5/19/2013 10:37:00 PM nicely stated.thanks for the visit.happy days to you and family.take care Login to Reply

Yours Truly Date: 4/22/2013 1:07:00 AM I love this poem skat :) it was well written and the vibe was sad but it was real. That's what I think is important that I can tell it was a real emotional writing. Thanks for sharing it was great vision food! -Yours Truly Login to Reply

Betty Bateson Date: 4/17/2013 9:09:00 AM There is romance and love out there. It will find you. Lovely poem. Betty Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 1/9/2013 11:52:00 PM you wull wake up to the melody of the blue jay dear.Sad and beautiful Login to Reply

John Castro Date: 11/28/2011 1:46:00 PM sometimes its hard to cry Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 6/10/2011 2:24:00 PM this was so beautifully written. cory Login to Reply

Nazie Kimbrity Date: 5/31/2011 4:19:00 AM I really liked it. I do agree that life goes on everyday Login to Reply

Julie Heckman Date: 1/2/2011 7:01:00 PM Funny you should mention it... I was just thinking about shooting myself today, it was after attending a writers workship! I hope your emotionlessness doesn't last forever. Julie Login to Reply

Lucinda Bulger Date: 12/31/2010 8:07:00 PM yes, life goes on, well written piece, although life goes on "every day", perhaps until we breathe no more... I tend to take things literal, forgive me. Cindy Login to Reply

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