Victor Buhagiar Poet Free verse

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Emotional Love

Oh, once we had a dream, in great romantic themes
Emotional dreams we loved to share every day.
How boisterous we were running around tall firs,
Stopping to catch our breath and lose it in a kiss.

Those were the cool summer days, so carefree, with love.
How we aspired for brighter days with mirthful stance,
Our beings of wedded bliss where life around us
Excited all passion and live in paradise.

Accidents do happen but we had lover's luck.
We never noticed the darkest clouds amassing.
Out of the blue a severe storm brewed over us.
We ran fast out of the forest to open green.

The forest was alighted with deadly lightning,
Thankfully we escaped what could have been our end.


30 December 2021
12 syllables per line.

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M. L. Kiser January 4, 2022 at 10:22 AM That's no place to be stuck in a downpour, that's for certain; lucky you left when you did. A good read.

Judy Ball January 3, 2022 at 10:56 AM Wonderful memories of adventures and near misses in a fun filled youth. Good stuff. God Bless, JB

Unseeking Seeker December 31, 2021 at 7:00 PM Tender reminisce from the past … beautiful! You are a delightful raconteur, Victor!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 31, 2021 at 7:40 AM - A lovely story (or memories), Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel December 31, 2021 at 2:26 AM Oh, well! Glad you survived it, Victor:) here's wishing you a happy, blessed, prosperous and a healthy New Year:)

Valsa George December 31, 2021 at 1:43 AM The initial days of romantic love are brought forth into memory and we too partake of them with a sense pf delight. Thank God you escaped from harm Victor !

Anselmo Boles December 30, 2021 at 11:37 PM Strong love, guided by lady luck, can weather any storm and keep two hearts beating in tandem. Nice one Victor!...ab

Mike Bayles December 30, 2021 at 10:24 PM You're a good story-teller with your poems, Victor.

Debra L Brown December 30, 2021 at 12:39 PM What a lovely poem. This couple will remember this night for the rest of their lives. Nicely written.... HNY and best wishes ~ Debra

Evelyn Judy Buehler December 30, 2021 at 12:09 PM A charming tale of young love in a natural paradise. Glad that they were able to escape the fire, and that the romance lives on. Blessings, Evelyn

Eve Roper December 30, 2021 at 8:10 AM Great verse with romantic with imagery. Yes, most fires are caused by the lighting. Happy New Years with best wishes and resolutions

Connie Marcum Wong December 30, 2021 at 6:14 AM Memories become more precious with time Victor. I loved this romantic poem. New year blessings xxoo

Sotto Poet December 30, 2021 at 6:11 AM Your poem's reassuring tone was immensely enjoyed, Victor. Rainstorms may be devastating to trees, but happily, you and your partner escaped it to safety in time to resume your love story in this beautiful reminiscence of sensual rejoicing.

Vijay Pandit December 30, 2021 at 4:21 AM Charming recall of romantic revelry, Victor. Much enjoyed the happy tone of your poem.

Tom Cunningham December 30, 2021 at 3:52 AM Those summer storms can be deadly by trees, thankfully you both made it to safety to continue your romance. Those summer romances we never forget. Tom