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'emotional Fluctuations'

Lips moving with eyes in observance Just like an out of body occurrence Going through the motions Fluctuation in my emotions Folly gone, the lot back to concurrence Contest: March Madness 3rd Place

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James Fraser

Date: 3/10/2011 8:06:00 AM

Many congratulation's Wilma on your win in Carloyn's "March Madness" contest....:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/9/2011 10:38:00 AM

Congratulations on a deserving 3rd Place win in Carolyn's contest, Wilma! Love, Annalise

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/9/2011 5:18:00 AM

Heartiest congrats for this victory.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/8/2011 3:09:00 PM

Great limerick on stress. Congratulaitons on a big win. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/8/2011 2:35:00 PM

Congrats on a well written, well deserved win, Wilma. Nice going. Thanks for your gracious comments. Luv Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/8/2011 2:08:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Carolyn, Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/8/2011 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's "March Madness" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 3/8/2011 11:26:00 AM

`Tis great to see you at the top Wilma with this worthy third place honor. Congratulations on your poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/8/2011 7:17:00 AM

Emotions are always in fluctuation and if we could go "out of body," we might be able to alleviate some of the stress. I think this is a very creative poem that really packs a punch. Congratulations on your win, Wilma! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 3/6/2011 7:03:00 AM

Fine Limerick, away from the norm of witt. If for a contest Wilma, good luck oh sassy one....:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/5/2011 1:31:00 PM

Best of luck with this exceptional write, Wilma. Looks like a winner! Love, Annalise

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/5/2011 1:19:00 PM

Excellent entry, Wilma. Excellent. Good luck. luv Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2011 11:12:00 AM

I didn't realize this was a contest entry when I first read it, Wilma. Thanks so much for entering. We have to laugh at our struggles and this fits the theme perfectly. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2011 10:44:00 AM

It'll be alright, Wilma. Weird Carolyn knows a lot about emotional fluctuations. LOL Cute limerick! Love from the weird one

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/5/2011 9:02:00 AM

I guess its that connection thing we talked about, its nice to peak in over there for a bit... love from me to you....Always Michael

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/5/2011 8:47:00 AM

Interesting thoughts you have shared my deep poet.. You Know I just love bing your first comment....thought provoking indeed...love Michael