Wilma Neels Poet Limerick

'emotional Fluctuations'

Lips moving with eyes in observance
Just like an out of body occurrence
Going through the motions
Fluctuation in my emotions
Folly gone, the lot back to concurrence



Contest: March Madness
3rd Place

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James Fraser March 10, 2011 at 8:06 AM Many congratulation's Wilma on your win in Carloyn's "March Madness" contest....:)

Audrey Haick March 9, 2011 at 10:38 AM Congratulations on a deserving 3rd Place win in Carolyn's contest, Wilma! Love, Annalise

Tahera Mannan March 9, 2011 at 5:18 AM Heartiest congrats for this victory.

Joyce Johnson March 8, 2011 at 3:09 PM Great limerick on stress. Congratulaitons on a big win. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor March 8, 2011 at 2:35 PM Congrats on a well written, well deserved win, Wilma. Nice going. Thanks for your gracious comments. Luv Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta March 8, 2011 at 2:08 PM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Carolyn, Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown March 8, 2011 at 12:07 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's "March Madness" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

John Freeman March 8, 2011 at 11:26 AM `Tis great to see you at the top Wilma with this worthy third place honor. Congratulations on your poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire March 8, 2011 at 7:17 AM Emotions are always in fluctuation and if we could go "out of body," we might be able to alleviate some of the stress. I think this is a very creative poem that really packs a punch. Congratulations on your win, Wilma! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser March 6, 2011 at 7:03 AM Fine Limerick, away from the norm of witt. If for a contest Wilma, good luck oh sassy one....:)

Audrey Haick March 5, 2011 at 1:31 PM Best of luck with this exceptional write, Wilma. Looks like a winner! Love, Annalise

Ralph Taylor March 5, 2011 at 1:19 PM Excellent entry, Wilma. Excellent. Good luck. luv Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire March 5, 2011 at 11:12 AM I didn't realize this was a contest entry when I first read it, Wilma. Thanks so much for entering. We have to laugh at our struggles and this fits the theme perfectly. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire March 5, 2011 at 10:44 AM It'll be alright, Wilma. Weird Carolyn knows a lot about emotional fluctuations. LOL Cute limerick! Love from the weird one

Michael J. Falotico March 5, 2011 at 9:02 AM I guess its that connection thing we talked about, its nice to peak in over there for a bit... love from me to you....Always Michael

Michael J. Falotico March 5, 2011 at 8:47 AM Interesting thoughts you have shared my deep poet.. You Know I just love bing your first comment....thought provoking indeed...love Michael