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Everlasting Love

A kiss of encouragement into bliss"Love" emotion that revolves encircling our heart. Warmth of passion, desire, we don't push or shove, driven force according to our whims takes part. Sometime mistaken for admiration of deep romantic arousing feelings will start. Chosen enduring vow spun on changing themes, woven on a web of everlasting dreams.
8/12/2017

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Date: 8/22/2017 11:53:00 PM
Your poem is beautifully, poetically, eloquently expressed Eve. Your last two lines are amazing. :)
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Date: 8/15/2017 12:05:00 AM
What a wonderful way of expressing love Eve. I love it....Maria
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Date: 8/14/2017 3:03:00 PM
love how this unfolded to that last strong line: a web of everlasting dreams. That it is indeed, Eve. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 8/14/2017 2:34:00 PM
dear Eve, If I don't have taste buds how are you going to define sweet for me? Some never understand what love is? The things that are happening in world is because of not knowing what is love, no matter how beautiful you write. The only thing that we need is MORE LOVE...
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Date: 8/14/2017 8:40:00 AM
I love the final two lines and where you took the theme of love, Eve:) I had written a poem, "Her silent story" inspired by your lovely mural, but it had less than 140 syllables, so I didn't enter it. Thought you'd like to go through it anyway:)
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Date: 8/14/2017 7:26:00 AM
Absolutely so ... the theme so enjoyably expressed in the Rispetto ... By the way, thank you so much for considering my poem Whispers of Anemone for the placement ... I feel honoured ...
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Date: 8/14/2017 6:41:00 AM
A Heavy SIGH! Pleasant! Pleasure reading poem.
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Date: 8/13/2017 1:27:00 PM
ohh you enthrall with your kind of loving, dear eve... how magnanimous... wonderful!..huggs
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Date: 8/13/2017 12:51:00 PM
You have a lot of LOVE and a HUGE heart Eve! Hugs!
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Date: 8/12/2017 10:43:00 PM
Hi Eve, I agree. Love is everything you said and more. I LOVED your title and content. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/12/2017 5:21:00 PM
Beautifully stated my friend...a Love Force...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/12/2017 7:44:00 AM
This is so nice Eve. Well written and a pleasure to read today :)
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Date: 8/12/2017 5:24:00 AM
Wow Eve, this is a fantastic write! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this magnificent poem this morning, you have spun a creative and awe inspiring poem here my friend! What a prominent piece of fine penmanship! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/12/2017 5:01:00 AM
an absolute delight to read this Saturday morning Eve and I especially love the final couplet:-) hugs Jan xx
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