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In the lough near Kylemore Abbey Floats a little green fishing boat. It wears with pride its battered paint, From years of wear it lost its coat. It made bitter the old man's heart After sweet Emma passed away. He now keeps next to home and hearth As all his days are colored grey. No persuasion can coax him back To do what he once loved to do. He was fishing when Emma died, Even though she begged him not to. Emma had been ill for some time; A long spell since he'd heard laughter. She felt that day that she would die. Guilt would plague him ever after. In verdant park her gravestone stands. Her sense of sweetness still abides In the old cottage they both shared, Along with him her ghost resides. 8-17-16 Note: lough sounds like lock and means a lake My poem was inspired by the titles of the six popular novels of My favorite lady poet and writer Miss Jane Austen. One word from each novel is included in my poem. Title's of Miss Austen's Books: Northanger Abbey  Persuasion Pride and Prejudice Emma Sense and Sensibility Mansfield Park

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Date: 12/19/2016 11:36:00 PM
this is so clever, Connie. I can't believe I saw one of yours that I had completely missed in the past. this is a charmer! Also< I wanted to thank you for being so generous reading my poems and commenting today. Caycay did the same to me. I love you two gals to death!! sure wish I had time here to read more but I just can't stay long. Hope to see more from you soon!!
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Date: 8/20/2016 12:05:00 AM
Wow, I just loved this! This is Poetry!!!!! A fav!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/20/2016 7:32:00 AM
Oh how sweet of you Arthur. I really appreciate your lovely comment and of course the fave! Thank you for making my night...now I am off to sleep. Blessings ; )
Date: 8/19/2016 3:40:00 PM
This could have been written by the wonderful Jane Austen herself. I love the way you wove the words into a beautiful sad story. I hope to see this do very well in the contest Connie:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/20/2016 7:27:00 AM
Wow Jan, you couldn't have given me a nicer compliment! Thank you so much. This poem is set in Ireland, near the beautiful Kylemore Abbey. Cheers ; ) xx
Date: 8/19/2016 6:09:00 AM
What a lovely write:) Jane Austen is one of my favourite authors and I've read all these six novels:)
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Date: 8/20/2016 7:28:00 AM
I haven't read them all but have seen all of them in movies. Thank you very much Jo. ; )
Date: 8/18/2016 9:07:00 PM
This is my kind of poetry... both beautiful and haunting at the same time, with a bit of mystery, too... An excellent poem, Connie. Adding this to my favorites!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/18/2016 9:46:00 PM
Wow, how wonderful that you like my poem enough to fave it Kelly. I feel love can reach beyond the grave. Thank you so much for making my day! ; )
Date: 8/18/2016 2:26:00 PM
this is very beautiful and quite impressive, connie! how cleverly you've woven the words from the novels into your poem. i enjoyed it very much...
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/19/2016 3:07:00 PM
I have been to Kylemore Abbey in Ireland Ilene, and when I saw a picture of a little green battered fishing boat in a picture with it, this poem came to light. Thank you so much. ; )
Date: 8/18/2016 7:43:00 AM
Very impressive write against the big canvas ... innovative too ... read with pleasure ... all the best ...
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/19/2016 3:02:00 PM
Thank you very much Probir. Have a great weekend. ; )
Date: 8/18/2016 7:35:00 AM
Such beautiful writing, Connie..the sad emotions felt deeper with the very fitting "old english" language and tone. A lovely story piece tribute to a favourite classic poet/author... elegantly penned by a favourite modern poet :-) Great skill in crafting this poem, I love it :-) A joy to read..a 7 and a fave. My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn p.s. I really appreciate your detailed notes... high learning value for me...thank you :-)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/18/2016 10:34:00 AM
How sweet of you Lynn. Thank you very much for your insightful and supportive comment, and especially the fave.. ; )
Date: 8/18/2016 7:15:00 AM
I think it's wonderful Mrs Connie. It could be an excerpt from an Austen novel. I really enjoyed reading this one.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/18/2016 10:28:00 AM
How kind of you Daniel. Thank you so very much. ; )
Date: 8/18/2016 5:50:00 AM
I enjoyed reading the poetry.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/18/2016 6:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Ronald. ; )

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