Emerald Stone

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Create A Crystaline Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

Date 6/14/25

emerald stone, her heart’s desire my wallet told me a small sapphire

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 6/18/2025 7:08:00 AM

that's there. cool. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/18/2025 7:35:00 AM

Thanks

Crystol Woods

Date: 6/17/2025 11:32:00 AM

Omg!!! I LOVE this!! :) the humor is sophisticated and unassuming. Winner in my book xoxo

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/17/2025 12:25:00 PM

Thanks much Crystol. Glad you liked this one.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2025 9:08:00 PM

Ha, ha. Reality gets in the way sometimes --- and then saves the day. ~ gw

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/15/2025 1:12:00 AM

Yes it does.

Jaymee Thomas

Date: 6/14/2025 11:48:00 AM

This made me genuinely laugh, Oliver. Great work.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/14/2025 1:42:00 PM

Thanks Jaymee. Glad you like this one.