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Emerald Eyes

Emerald eyes Pull my unconscious mind Like magnets. Forever, myself belongs to you No matter how far we separate, I try to escape your force, But the Earthly world forbids my request. In different lights and shapes We are always drawn together. I want to be freed, Yet your iris commands differently. As children we talked of folly and a joyful future, But could our polar ends ever attract again, sufficiently? For now the gems sparkle And my heart flutters, My body trembles, When our glances meet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/23/2011 4:11:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Nicole. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2011 9:31:00 PM
Great job and welcome to PS. Have fun and be creative. This was wonderful:)
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Date: 5/21/2011 8:54:00 PM
Welcome to the soup Nicole. This is beautifully written
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Date: 5/21/2011 6:54:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your amazing creative poetry tonight and emerald eyes denote green for the month of May as well so beautiful... glorious.. hope u have fun on PS as u share with luv..
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