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Embracing Earth

Earth's
magnificent
bounties
reaching
across
continents,
Igniting
natural
growth.

Erasing
all
relevance
to
humanity.



* We should embrace earth, for it can thrive without us, whereas we are not so self sufficient.


July 08, 2014
Contest: Acrostic 1 in 4
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 6:37:00 PM

Hi Arlene,, a true deep scenario .... Congratulations, on your wonderful win. Always~ LINDA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2014 5:52:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/22/2014 6:00:00 PM

Thanks, sweet Sarah.. Hugs.. Arlene

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/21/2014 9:58:00 PM

I agree, Arlene. Mother Nature deserves much more respect than we give to her, because with out her, we humans cannot survive.... Your acrostic was so unique using just one word for each letter! Very well done, my friend! Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/22/2014 6:24:00 AM

Thank you sweet Kelly.. I would have loved to have seen this beautiful planet before it was populated.. Can you imagine!!.. Hugs.. Arlene

A.E. Rivenbark

Date: 7/19/2014 2:38:00 PM

Excellent! Congratulations on your win

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/19/2014 4:45:00 PM

Thank you dear friend!... Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/19/2014 8:56:00 AM

my dear friend Arlene!!! wow!!! how beautiful your heart is as I see each poem I read from you and this one is one of them... :D this a short lil poem that is concrete in telling the world needs unification!!! :) SUPERB WIN!!! hugs.... ..................olive eloisa, God bless you.

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/19/2014 9:31:00 AM

Goe bless you too, sweet Olive... Thank you so much for these comments.. Made my day, dear... Hugs.. Arlene

Greg Hoffman

Date: 7/18/2014 8:41:00 PM

Congrats Arlene on your win with this wonderful poem.I really like when acrostic poems are done using only one word for each letter.Well done

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 8:56:00 PM

Thank you! Gregg my friend.. Hugs... Arlene

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/18/2014 8:32:00 PM

That is completely awesome! you did so well with this and I applaud you Arlene :)

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 8:56:00 PM

Thank you so much sweet Casarah!.. Hugs.. Arlene

David Mohn

Date: 7/18/2014 7:20:00 PM

Just wonderful Arlene and no small feat using one word a line!...thanks for the comments on mine as well

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 7:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, David my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2014 2:28:00 PM

Congratulations Arlene... PD

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/18/2014 8:44:00 AM

Wow, Arlene...great concept employed here to get a beautiful and stirring message across. This is good! Congratulations.

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 10:08:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Faye! ... Hugs... Arlene

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/18/2014 8:33:00 AM

You make an excellent point. I like the direction you took with using single words. Congratulations!

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 10:06:00 AM

Thank you so much, Richard! Working on getting my point across with fewer words... Hugs.. Arlene

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/18/2014 7:03:00 AM

Especially like the "EARTH" portion..so meaningful. congrats. BG

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 7:21:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Barbara!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Paul Callus

Date: 7/18/2014 6:04:00 AM

Hi Arlene! The acrostic itself is excellently done, so is the message you seek to convey. Well done! Congratulations!! // paul

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 6:11:00 AM

Thank you, dear Paul.. Hugs, my friend... Arlene

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/18/2014 12:39:00 AM

Very brilliant take Arlene! Great message ,, congrats on such a deserved win!

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 5:55:00 AM

Thank you so much, sweet Doc!!.. I am always encouraged by your kind words.. Hugs.. Arlene

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2014 11:28:00 PM

this is what I would point out to folks as an excellent example of BREVITY for a poem with a meaningful message. WEll done. That is why you won third place!!

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 5:53:00 AM

Thank you SO MUCH! This win means the most so far because that and beautiful imagery is what I struggle with.. Anyone can write a story, or rhyme words. I want to write poetry.... Hugs dear Andrea.. Arlene

Ryan Farmer

Date: 7/16/2014 3:09:00 PM

You remind me of how the sahara sands are blown cross the Atlantic ocean and fertilze the Amazon jungle. The earth can feed itself, and it feeds us too.

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/16/2014 3:50:00 PM

Alas!!!!!!... Someone got it!!... Thanks for your comments, Ryan my friend! Hugs.. Arlene