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Embraced For Eternity

You were there in the night Sensual rhapsody evolved With a safe place in sight Our love mystery was solved I can still feel your hair A fathomless love union found With invincible care Synchronicity to be crowned We discovered our bliss Beyond quietus it would be No longer would we miss The truth in visions that we see It was our love story Silently falling into place A familiar glory For eternity we embrace Heidi Sands 3/21/18 *Placed 2nd for the 5 word contest. Words required: Rhapsody, Fathomless, Quietus, Eternity, Story Syllables 6,8,6,8

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Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2018 3:11:00 PM

Heidi, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful love poem . . .

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/3/2018 5:53:00 PM

Thank you very much for the kind words and placement. I appreciate the opportunity to be in your contest :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 4/1/2018 7:26:00 PM

An awesome charming love poem for the contest Heidi; Congrats on a well deserved win!~Che :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/1/2018 7:30:00 PM

Thank you Cheryl! Happy Easter :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/24/2018 12:15:00 PM

Beautifully woven romantic tapestry, Heidi. Your pen sparkles, as always. Love and smiles.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/24/2018 12:17:00 PM

Thank you Freddie :) Have a nice day today !

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/22/2018 9:39:00 AM

A lovely, romantic poem, Heidi and all the requirements met with great flow xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/22/2018 9:46:00 AM

Thank you very much Mike. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/21/2018 6:24:00 PM

You blended the required words seamlessly..good flow and amorous feelings in your poem..best for a win, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/21/2018 6:25:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay. I am happy to see your feedback :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/21/2018 4:08:00 PM

Very nicely penned Heidi...GL in the contest...

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/21/2018 4:09:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)