Embraced For Eternity

You were there in the night
Sensual rhapsody evolved 
With a safe place in sight
Our love mystery was solved

I can still feel your hair
A fathomless love union found
With invincible care
Synchronicity to be crowned

We discovered our bliss
Beyond quietus it would be
No longer would we miss
The truth in visions that we see

It was our love story
Silently falling into place
A familiar glory
For eternity we embrace

Heidi Sands

3/21/18

*Placed 2nd for the  5 word contest. 
Words required:  Rhapsody, Fathomless, Quietus, Eternity, Story

Syllables 6,8,6,8
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 4/3/2018 3:11:00 PM
Heidi, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful love poem . . .
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/3/2018 5:53:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind words and placement. I appreciate the opportunity to be in your contest :)
Date: 4/1/2018 7:26:00 PM
An awesome charming love poem for the contest Heidi; Congrats on a well deserved win!~Che :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/1/2018 7:30:00 PM
Thank you Cheryl! Happy Easter :)
Date: 3/24/2018 12:15:00 PM
Beautifully woven romantic tapestry, Heidi. Your pen sparkles, as always. Love and smiles.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/24/2018 12:17:00 PM
Thank you Freddie :) Have a nice day today !
Date: 3/22/2018 9:39:00 AM
A lovely, romantic poem, Heidi and all the requirements met with great flow xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/22/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Mike. :)
Date: 3/21/2018 6:24:00 PM
You blended the required words seamlessly..good flow and amorous feelings in your poem..best for a win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/21/2018 6:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay. I am happy to see your feedback :)
Date: 3/21/2018 4:08:00 PM
Very nicely penned Heidi...GL in the contest...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/21/2018 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
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