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Embrace the New

my green you envy is gone 
it lays as soft auburn rug 
bare yet tall rooted I am 
to embrace new form




30-Sep-2020
Writing Challenge - Dodoitsu - Poetry Contest
It has 26 syllables made of  four lines of 7, 7, 7, 5 syllables respectively.
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Date: 10/6/2020 3:45:00 PM
many congrats on your win Sathya:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/5/2020 7:48:00 AM
Sathya, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem _Constance
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Date: 10/4/2020 1:26:00 PM
Nice penning Sathya! Congratulations! Linda
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Date: 10/4/2020 11:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Sathya :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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