Embers of Time

A fire was burning in a previous day. Now, just ashes and charred fixtures remain today. In just a brief incidence, it has all gone away. Somehow, good things are not here to stay. This seashore town certainly had a lot. Now, there are only memories of this spot. Vacationers loved the boardwalk, the surf, and the sand. The sun and the salty air made everything so grand. What was once a lovely place for a summer vacation has been victimized by a massive conflagration. All we see now is blackened devastation. I can only go back in time with my imagination.
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Lindley Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:52 PM
Congrats on the win my friend!!
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May 20, 2014 at 10:37 PM
Robert, , Congratulations, a beautiful " Embers Of Time" theme..... Always~ Linda
Mehta Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:31 AM
Congratulations on a fine fine, Robert
Walker  Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena
Lindley Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 12:34 AM
A great write! I wrote a similar expression about my hometown in one of my offerings here. Sad to go back home to see it is just too late.. time waits for no man, beast or place!
Kiser Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 2:06 PM
I can see this changing with time. Well painted.
Ioane Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 4:29 PM
'Ashes to ashes' a reality of life, a beautiful but sad poem well summed up with '...I can only go back in time with my imagination.' Loved reading this Robert, Alofas Tiaua.
Allison Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Fabulous imagery Robert and sadly the last verse is so true of oh so many places. Hugs Jan x
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