Vijay Pandit Poet Sonnet

Embers of Love

My golden eve gleams ebullient sun beams
When flares of fantasies in your eyes blaze
As echoes of fervor whisper your dreams
Where sensual concert in your heart plays

Hold me my dear in passions of your heart
And hear voice of desires crooning your name
As message of warmth blazing souls impart
Where embers of romance ignite our flame

Oh! how does the moon know I love you so
And why do the heavens behold your glance
While vows of our love in gleeful winds blow
And dazzling your sight euphoric stars dance

Your answer my love in the moonlight glows
How fondly you told them, it’s me you chose

October 18, 2020
Placed 1st: Love sonnet poetry contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Placed 1st: Completely your choice (30) by Brian Strand
Placed 1st: Your best 2020 sonnet contest by John Hamilton

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Line Gauthier January 25, 2021 at 6:21 PM Beautiful, Vijay ~ so happy to find this lovely sonnet published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~

Linda Alice Fowler January 4, 2021 at 2:42 PM Once again Vijay, you do not disappoint with your beautiful imagery :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

John Hamilton January 4, 2021 at 8:50 AM This is still one of my faves, congrats Vijay on another win with this beauty!

Valerie Staton November 21, 2020 at 6:48 AM This is such a beautifully written poem! A FAVE for sure! Vijay Pandit November 30, 2020 at 7:01 AM Thank you Valerie.

Liam Mcdaid November 19, 2020 at 2:38 PM those embers really shine like a dream in your pen vijay a very beautifully painted picture in words wishing you a blessed weekend Vijay Pandit November 30, 2020 at 7:01 AM Thank you Liam.

Akkina Downing November 5, 2020 at 6:02 PM Ahh, tender love, how sweet sweet it is. Vijay, simply sweet love :) Vijay Pandit November 16, 2020 at 6:29 AM Thank you Akkina.

Jennifer Proxenos October 26, 2020 at 9:20 AM Hi Vijay, a powerful love story with much emotion and passion in it and your imagination is par excellence in this breathtaking poem. Beautiful Vijay, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Jennifer Proxenos October 26, 2020 at 9:22 AM And congratulations my dear friend on your win in the contest, I am not surprised! Hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Galia October 23, 2020 at 5:55 AM Heartiest Congratulations Vijayji on your win.. Vijay Pandit October 24, 2020 at 6:25 AM Thank you Vijay--much appreciate.

Elaine George October 22, 2020 at 5:08 AM Such a beautiful sonnet of love, dear Vijay. Many congrats on your top-notch win. ~ Elaine Vijay Pandit October 23, 2020 at 5:21 AM Thank you Elaine--much appreciate.

Paul Callus October 21, 2020 at 6:13 AM Imagery, love and romance combine to produce a delightful result, Vijay. Congratulations on your top win. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit October 21, 2020 at 8:56 AM Much appreciate Paul--many thanks. Regards.

John Lawless October 20, 2020 at 12:56 PM Love those "embers of romance" Vijay, nicely done Vijay Pandit October 21, 2020 at 6:00 AM Much appreciate John--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy October 20, 2020 at 6:03 AM Vijay, this is such a beautiful, romantic sonnet. I love it! Janice Vijay Pandit October 20, 2020 at 6:26 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole October 19, 2020 at 8:40 PM "Where embers of romance ignite our flame" And that is how it should be. This is so beautiful and romantic. I see that congratulations are in order. Your words belong in the spotlight. Simply breathtaking my dear friend. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit October 20, 2020 at 6:26 AM Much appreciate my friend your visit and kind remarks--many thanks, as always.

Beryl Edmonds October 19, 2020 at 12:09 PM A lovely, charming love sonnet Vijay, told in a most heart warming way. Congratulations on the win, Belle Vijay Pandit October 19, 2020 at 1:47 PM Thank you Belle--much appreciate your visit and comments.

John Hamilton October 19, 2020 at 10:55 AM An excellent write congrats Vijay on a top win! Vijay Pandit October 19, 2020 at 1:46 PM Much appreciate John--your comments mean a lot. Many thanks for holding contests.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2020 at 7:29 AM - Beautiful written, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit October 19, 2020 at 8:13 AM Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate, as always.

Chuck Melugin October 19, 2020 at 3:21 AM VJ.. when the contest was sonnet you were right on it those embers still burn where your pen is concerned you kindled those hearts to set the night on fire! Vijay Pandit October 19, 2020 at 6:16 AM Haven't seen much of you lately, Chuck. Many thanks for the kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit.

Joanna Daniel October 19, 2020 at 2:04 AM I agree with Victor, this sonnet is superb, Vijay:) Vijay Pandit October 19, 2020 at 6:15 AM Much appreciate Jo--many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar October 18, 2020 at 10:53 PM Super sonnet. You expressed love and romance in such beautiful and dazzling imagery. Luck for the top place. ~~ Vijay Pandit October 19, 2020 at 6:15 AM Thank you Victor--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman October 18, 2020 at 6:51 PM Wow, awesome sonnet, Vijay, will do well in contest.. Vijay Pandit October 19, 2020 at 6:14 AM Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.

Heidi Sands October 18, 2020 at 5:19 PM This is a beautiful Sonnet! So well written Vijay! Excellent :) Vijay Pandit October 19, 2020 at 6:14 AM Thank you Heidi--much appreciate.

Alexis Y. October 18, 2020 at 3:36 PM WoW! You’ve such a well written love Sonnet. Your pen paints a lovely picture. I got lost in each line. Nice rhythm and flow. Good rhymes and content as well. It was very poetic as well. Looks like a top contender to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit October 18, 2020 at 3:43 PM So very kind of you to say so, Alexis. Enjoyed reading your comments. Much appreciate--Many thanks, as always.

Angela Crabtree October 18, 2020 at 3:35 PM A beautiful Sonnet full of romance... :) Vijay Pandit October 18, 2020 at 3:42 PM Thank you Angela--much appreciate.

Nette Onclaud October 18, 2020 at 1:56 PM written with such aplomb and fondness, vijay...the language of love sweetly speaks!...huggs Vijay Pandit October 18, 2020 at 3:41 PM Thank for the compliments my friend--much appreciate, Nette.

Andrea Dietrich October 18, 2020 at 12:58 PM this is certainly a love sonnet and a wowser too!! All the best in John's contest. Vijay Pandit October 18, 2020 at 3:41 PM That's is so special--coming from you Andrea. Much appreciate--many thanks.

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