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Embers Can Reignite

soft
warm
loving
Katy Cat
such pure loyalty
I had never known from humans
as years pass, I see I may never find it again
unless I overcome the emptiness I felt when I lost her and adopt once more

life
ends
sometimes
far too soon
grief can overwhelm
paralyzing abandoned souls
preventing us from moving on and taking a chance
we may discover love’s embers can reignite if we just learn to open our hearts 



*Written January 8, 2019
For "Writing Challenge January, 2019- Fibonacci - Poetry Contest"
Sponsored by Dear Heart

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Michelle Faulkner Date: 1/24/2019 11:48:00 PM We had to put our elderly dog to sleep right before Thanksgiving, this brings her memory back, but I hope in time you can find another kitty who needs a home, this is so expressive- Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 1/15/2019 6:57:00 PM Wonderful descript of a Kaleidoscope of emotions for our little furry loved ones. Man I'm sorry for your loss ! Still miss my Frankie boy and several others lost along the way. Your Fibonnaci is lovely. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 1/14/2019 10:55:00 AM A loving, beautiful tribute. But my heart is sad, the loss of your Katy Cat. (Such a sweet face) I know the loss of our beloved best friends, nothing compares. Especially after 22 years. If and when you are ready, adopt again. You alone will know when that will happen, be gentle with yourself. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/14/2019 10:34:00 AM Back to congratulate you on your wonderful second place win Carolyn. I loved this sweet tribute. xxoo Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/13/2019 8:33:00 AM - Congratulations on a beautiful winning poem, dear Carolyn :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 1/12/2019 5:06:00 PM I don't know where I would be without my kitties ... especially Sugar - she is my sunshine and my joy, and the sweetest spirit I've ever known! I got them (rescued from abuse) after my Cosby died, and they saved my life, (and my heart). Congratulations on your wonderful win in the Fibonacci contest, Carolyn - blessings to you and yours, and keep writing, my friend! :-) <3 Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 1/12/2019 3:11:00 PM So sorry your lost your beloved cat Carolyn, but as you said grief sometimes prevents us from moving on... Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 1/12/2019 1:38:00 PM Hi Carolyn, So sorry to hear about your loss. I hope you find another kitty in the near future. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 1/12/2019 1:31:00 PM Carolyn, congratulations on your win in my contest with this heartwarming Fibonacci, it truly touched my heart ~ Login to Reply Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/12/2019 1:34:00 PM Thank you, Dear Heart. I sent a Soup mail to you.

Line Gauthier Date: 1/12/2019 1:27:00 PM Dear Carolyn, sounds like you're ready. More importantly, there is a kitty out there waiting for your love. Line xx P.S. Congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/12/2019 1:33:00 PM Right now I'm trying to see if some neighbors would mind caring for my cat if I travel. As soon as that is worked out, I do plan to adopt. How nice it would be to have a cuddly kitty sleep with me again. I like dogs too, but cats are easier to care for and the type of furniture I have couldn't be damaged by kitties who want to sharpen their claws. Thanks for reading.

Ann Gilmour Date: 1/12/2019 12:10:00 PM What a wonderful tribute to your beautiful Katy Cat. Our pets give us unconditional love for sure, so to lose that love takes a piece of our heart too. I have never had a cat, but dogs, rabbits and guinea pigs and each one loved and cherished. This way of writing I have never tried, a challenge for the future maybe? Congrats on your placement Carolyn such a poignant write. Kindest thoughts Ann xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/10/2019 5:59:00 PM by the way , is that her actual picture ? if so, she was very pretty! My Callie cat was very plain but her soul was so beautiful. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/10/2019 5:58:00 PM wow, I love your expression of love for your cat here, Carolyn. I had one that was calico so we called her Callie cat. It has the same ring to it. She lasted 18 years till cancer got her. I never had another cat as good as her, not one cat of the many in my life. But still, I hope you adopt another one. They are such sweet company if you find one that is even half decent. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/9/2019 8:06:00 PM Yes, open your heart to ignite the flame! Beautifully expressed, Carolyn. Sorry for your loss. May it be transformed into an even greater gain! :) gw Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/9/2019 2:40:00 PM This is so beautiful Carolyn! I can relate so deeply with the sentiments in your lovely Fibonacci. I am still mourning our Tommy Cat who died two years ago now. I am sorry for your loss. Your Katy sounds so precious! : ) xxoo Login to Reply Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/9/2019 7:47:00 PM Your loss was more recent, Connie. Katy's been gone for at least 10 years now. I'm sure you miss Tommy as much as I miss her. She was the most loving of all the cats I've raised.

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/8/2019 4:14:00 PM Sorry to hear about your loss Carolyn, over the years we lost two spaniels, they were part of the family and you never forget them. Good luck in the contest. Tom. Login to Reply Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/8/2019 4:24:00 PM It's not a recent loss, Tom, but I haven't been able to get past it and adopt another cat. Finding her dead and digging her grave were very painful. I still cry thinking about it.

Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 1/8/2019 3:32:00 PM Sorry you lost Katy. I love cats and we've had a series of cats over the years. The latest one we lost was 19 year old Simba who contracted cancer. A year or so later we got dear old Jeff and he is a constant companion (nosiest cat we've ever had!) Follows me around like a puppy and is relaxing on the desk as I type this! He gives me great comfort since Vera's passing. Great entry for the contest - Bob Login to Reply Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/8/2019 4:25:00 PM I'm so glad you have Jeff now, Bob. Animals make great companions when we're coping with loss. Thanks for reading.

Susan Ashley Date: 1/8/2019 3:07:00 PM Oh, Carolyn, your poem is so beautifully soulful. Your poignant words have a gentle power that reaches in deep and touches the furthest corners of my heart. I'm so sorry for the loss of your beloved best friend, Katy Cat. Your feelings resonate within me, my dear friend. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan Login to Reply Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/8/2019 3:12:00 PM You are always so kind, Susan. Let me visit your page now.