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Liberty taken with triolet form. Labeled as verse.

Embers and snowflakes f a l l from sky — An a v a l a n c h e of fire and ice. Mascara burns in frozen-cry. Embers and snowflakes fall from sky, As somber Winter, s e v a w goodbye. A cardinal song would not suffice. Embers and snowflakes fall from sky, An A V A L A N C H E of fire and ice. 12/28/2017 Contest sponsor - Anthony Slausen

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Date: 12/28/2017 3:58:00 PM
Great imagery Kim...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2017 5:10:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Date: 12/28/2017 1:59:00 PM
I loved it..this is so very artistic and beautiful..a winning poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2017 2:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Some poems just beg to be played with!
Date: 12/28/2017 1:45:00 PM
- Lovely described and shaped, Kim - Good luck in the contest - Happy New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2017 2:02:00 PM
Happy New Year, my Sunshine friend!

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