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The Georgia pines in embers stood at the end of autumn's day Hushed silence waited for the night Noctural ones yawning lay The embers slowly faded away Pitch black engulfed the trees A whip-poor-will began a song The last to be believed Coyotes tucked away inside No yelps from their spring's born Do they know winter's cold soon comes If so are they forlorn? Snug and warm inside their lined dens Animals closely lay Are their bellies full as the cattle's Who inside barn stalls stay? God takes care of the animals He also cares for man Man thinks he does it on his own But without God he can't stand

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Date: 12/20/2017 9:40:00 AM
Nature is the workshop of God.
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Date: 12/7/2017 6:03:00 PM
Wonderful verse, Sara, I enjoyed reading .. I feel that all animals think and feel..
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/8/2017 1:30:00 PM
Eve, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you dropping by..I think that animals know a whole lot more than we give them credit..From observing my dogs I believe that they have emotion just like humans and they are very intelligent..They get upset when we are gone..Sara
Date: 12/7/2017 12:36:00 AM
Dear Sara: Nicely done. Leon
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/7/2017 2:37:00 PM
Leon, Thanks for the visit by my page..I appreciate the time spent here..Sara
Date: 12/6/2017 8:59:00 AM
Awesomely said, indeed God fills the tummies of both wild n farm animals. The imagery in this is exotic for me and so poetic and fabulous the way u describe n rhyme. So true that without God no one can stand.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/6/2017 3:51:00 PM
S.zaynab, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent her reading and taking time to comment..Some don't believe as we believe but someday every knee will bow..Sara
Date: 12/4/2017 1:50:00 PM
- Really wonderful written Sara, thank you very much - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2017 3:43:00 PM
SS, Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that I posted it..I wrote part of it then finally by something outside of me it came together one day..Your presence at my page is appreciated..Sara
Date: 12/3/2017 2:20:00 AM
Excellent. Thought-provoking write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2017 3:44:00 PM
Ravi, Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment on my work..I hope that you had deep thoughts and good thoughts after reading..Your presence is appreciated..Sara
Date: 12/2/2017 5:45:00 PM
Beautiful poem...Message for all...Nice Sara..
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Date: 12/4/2017 3:45:00 PM
Michael, I hope that it is a good message and well received..Thanks for your presence here..Your are a very good co-writer..Sara
Date: 12/2/2017 5:44:00 PM
Beautiful poem...Message for all...Nice Sara...
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