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Elvis With a Twist

Elvis with a twist I am caught in a trap I can’t walk out because I’ve got no money why can’t you see your annoying me you don’t listen to a word I say we can’t go on together I want to build my own dreams here we go again nag nag nag dry the tears from my eyes I am going to the shop to buy a lotto so I can blotto out of here ?)

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Date: 7/7/2017 2:07:00 PM
Great write, on Elvis. I think I should buy some tickets too. Thanks for liking my Gone Fishing :)
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Date: 6/18/2017 9:11:00 PM
Brilliant twist love it - now I've read this I just know Elvis is not dead and really does work down at our local chippy - he he he x x x
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Niall Fulham
Date: 6/19/2017 3:51:00 AM
Hi Indiana Shaw , nice to meet , thank you for comment and I am looking forward to reading your works soon :))))hugs from Ireland
Date: 4/28/2017 1:52:00 PM
- Good luck hope you will win in lotto ... (your dreams) - Remember that money does not make happiness in life ... I do not think Elvis was happy ... He had everything ... but the price of life became his death - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/28/2017 2:20:00 PM
Hi Anna-Lise , Thanks I have learned that lesson I am or will be next month a nifty fifty , my happy I create from within I have a few tricks I use , eg look in the mirror and smile for a while:)))) hugs

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