Eloquence of Spring

From the  crispness of morning  to dusk 
when all boughs sashay to unfurl,
deepening the fragrance of airbrushed woods…
she will bask in  her own pleasure
on a carriage of  larkspurs , jays  in the shade--- 
while the breeze fondles  her hair
ripening the glow of early May, ablaze. 

Oh how she pulses more daring 
than  winter , not icy-white but pink, pink
like a virginal woman whose fertile seeds 
enter  my womb: that I drink from her
minty sup, luscious as Taurus’ nectar.

Until spring raises her hands...fluid, raw, 
loving; then, to explode into blossomed flight
through the language of time’s renaissance-- 
a charmed  way, basking in her own pleasure,
then to grant me the eloquence of god’s art.


4/27/2018
Spring Contest of Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Very vivid imagery, nette. Congrats on your win.
Carber Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Congrats, Nette, on your win-- you employ a perfect conceit and lovely imagery to develop it-- very nicely done!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 2:06 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your win.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:42 PM
A sensuous eloquent piece Nette, lovely done. Congrats on your win :) xomo!
Inman Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:00 PM
What an exception description of spring, beautiful Nette.
Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Congratulations on your retro-, classic poem for the spring contest. A wonderful write! Well done.
Datu Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Always subtle, enigmatic that rouses the senses. Congratulations, Muse of Spring !
Cornish Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 2:08 PM
There is always something about your poems that is like a painting - strokes not of a brush, but of words that paint beautiful thoughts. Thank you for sharing.
Anish Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Great tribute to the natural world in springtime! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Sabre Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 6:28 AM
With a breathtaking poem such as this, I could hardly wait for her to bloom!
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 5:33 AM
- A lovely time and a beautiful poem, Nette - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 26, 2018 at 4:58 PM
So beautiful!
Pandit Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 4:01 PM
Eloquent words..this poem is charming just like the spring season it depicts..best for a win, nette.
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