Elm and Ivy - With White Wolf

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Budgie managed to get me to write again, I am very grateful to him for providing me with the first stanza, he's a wonderful friend :) *** Elm stood regally and rigid. Ivy looked up in awe and said, a little timid: “Ahhhh, to be so big, close to the Sun” Elm nodded with a focused gaze, he was, to be fair, somewhat amazed, and thought to himself: “What harm could it do to allow this slight little weed to wrap around me, gain my sight?” She looked so sweet and small, he was so strong and tall Ivy snug a little closer and in a tight embrace clung for dear life to his twigs, wound her lithe limbs 'round his leaves, entangled him with lovely sprigs. Elm liked that sweet intrusion. It tickled him in many ways: "A little higher now, my dear, just an inch more, yes here." Ivy flexed her fingers, green and poisonous, Elm didn't see through her ambition from his high position. "Oh Elm, I'm almost near your head. Oh Elm, show me your eyes, I will caress your delicious neck with my small leaves?" Ivy wound 'round him in strong embrace, and before long his breathing ceased. Then Ivy eased, for from her high up vantage point, she became queen could see so far she'd never seen. And only then she lost her grip... When Elm broke and crashed Ivy realised she only ruled a Kingdom of soil and dust. *** September 3, 2017 Copyright © White Wolf and Darren White

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Date: 9/6/2017 8:52:00 AM
Hi Darren, I'm glad Rick helped you to start writing again. You and Rick wrote a good collaboration . One must watch out for poison " Ivy" should cause a whole lot of trouble. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Darren White
Date: 9/7/2017 5:57:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment, Alexis :)
Date: 9/5/2017 7:02:00 PM
Oh I love this from beginning to end. Great collaboration guys :)
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Darren White
Date: 9/6/2017 3:19:00 AM
Thank you Akkina :)
Date: 9/5/2017 5:58:00 PM
Hey, it's Wolfie and Penguino...I'm glad Budgie, got you to write again my friend...great Collab...keep it up...god bless...^WW^
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Darren White
Date: 9/6/2017 3:19:00 AM
The brothers White, animal brothers, haha, thanks WW
Date: 9/5/2017 12:56:00 PM
Love love love this! Great humor and insight! Oh what tangles, tantalizes, surprises! Great work, my friends! Fave!
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Darren White
Date: 9/6/2017 3:18:00 AM
Wow, Kim, thanks for the fav!!
Date: 9/4/2017 9:57:00 PM
Better late than never!!! I so love what you have done with this, Duir!!!
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Darren White
Date: 9/6/2017 3:18:00 AM
Lol, Budgie, how do you like the picture?
Date: 9/4/2017 5:18:00 AM
Brilliant, you and White Wolf are so clever and creative, I enjoyed this from start to finish. :))
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Darren White
Date: 9/6/2017 3:17:00 AM
Thanks so much Roy :)
Date: 9/3/2017 10:24:00 PM
This is so creative and original, I have to add, I sure wish I was a tree!!!! :)
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Darren White
Date: 9/4/2017 1:23:00 AM
It's fun, isn't it :) Thanks my friend!
Date: 9/3/2017 1:03:00 PM
A very serious lesson in life; "Beware the tyranny of the weak." Very well done using nature as an example.The elms hubris the ivies mendacity.
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Darren White
Date: 9/4/2017 1:23:00 AM
Hehe, I love the comment :)
Date: 9/3/2017 11:34:00 AM
Sure blame it on the woman for being a clinging vine. haha I'm teasing. This is so wonderful in its lesson as only the two of you can so adeptly do. Ok now, Budgie...we'll all know who to call when our muse takes a siesta.
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Darren White
Date: 9/4/2017 1:24:00 AM
Yeah, I agree it's horrible, but Ivy is SUCH a feminine name ;)
Date: 9/3/2017 8:38:00 AM
An amazing write and moral gents....great to see you writing my friend
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Darren White
Date: 9/3/2017 8:40:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend :) Enjoy your weekend!
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