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Elixir

Oh
Kiss me 
My Darling
Let me taste your
Warm nectar my love 
There is nothing like it
I need my fill each second 
Baby, please do not make me wait
How long must I wait for your elixir?
For it’s nourishment after a long drought

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/2/2023 11:58:00 AM Ahhh!! So romantic. Way to go with this very descriptive one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/2/2023 6:57:00 AM The desire felt! Great etheree! Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 10/1/2023 5:50:00 PM Passionate! I like it. Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/1/2023 12:18:00 PM Delightfully romantic! A beautifully composed etheree! :) Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 10/1/2023 1:31:00 PM Hi Evelyn, I'm thrilled that you found it delightfully romantic. I appreciate that you stopped by:-)Alexis

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/1/2023 12:09:00 PM Romantic words of longing. So well written! Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 10/1/2023 1:30:00 PM Hi Vijay, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Silent One Date: 10/1/2023 11:36:00 AM A lovely sweet and romantic etheree.. you spread so much romance in this restricted form.. great choice of words also.. well done Alexis. Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 10/1/2023 1:29:00 PM Hi Silent, I appreciate such a comment coming from you. You romance very well. Thanks for stopping by;-)Alexis

Lin Lane Date: 10/1/2023 8:18:00 AM and you talk about my romantic writing. lol Alexis, yours is scrumptiously tasty. Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 10/1/2023 1:27:00 PM Hi Lin, Thanks for such a comment. But yours is much better times 10! I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Jan Allison Date: 10/1/2023 8:07:00 AM ooh err this is a romantic sensual little piece Alexis:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 10/1/2023 7:51:00 AM Alexis, your poetry conjures up a plethora of enthralling and vivid images in my head, similar to a spellbinding tapestry constructed with rich metaphors. Best of luck with the contest Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 10/1/2023 1:35:00 PM WoW! Lasaad, Thank you so much for leaving such a wonderful review and comment. I appreciate your support l:-)Alexis