Elixir

Oh Kiss me My Darling Let me taste your Warm nectar my love There is nothing like it I need my fill each second Baby, please do not make me wait How long must I wait for your elixir? For it’s nourishment after a long drought

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2023 11:58:00 AM

Ahhh!! So romantic. Way to go with this very descriptive one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/2/2023 6:57:00 AM

The desire felt! Great etheree!

Karen Jones

Date: 10/1/2023 5:50:00 PM

Passionate! I like it.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/1/2023 2:05:00 PM

a romantic and lovely Etheree, Alexis. A delight to read, Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/1/2023 12:18:00 PM

Delightfully romantic! A beautifully composed etheree! :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/1/2023 1:31:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, I'm thrilled that you found it delightfully romantic. I appreciate that you stopped by:-)Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/1/2023 12:09:00 PM

Romantic words of longing. So well written!

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/1/2023 1:30:00 PM

Hi Vijay, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Silent One

Date: 10/1/2023 11:36:00 AM

A lovely sweet and romantic etheree.. you spread so much romance in this restricted form.. great choice of words also.. well done Alexis.

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/1/2023 1:29:00 PM

Hi Silent, I appreciate such a comment coming from you. You romance very well. Thanks for stopping by;-)Alexis

Lin Lane

Date: 10/1/2023 8:18:00 AM

and you talk about my romantic writing. lol Alexis, yours is scrumptiously tasty.

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/1/2023 1:27:00 PM

Hi Lin, Thanks for such a comment. But yours is much better times 10! I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 10/1/2023 8:07:00 AM

ooh err this is a romantic sensual little piece Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/1/2023 7:51:00 AM

Alexis, your poetry conjures up a plethora of enthralling and vivid images in my head, similar to a spellbinding tapestry constructed with rich metaphors. Best of luck with the contest

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/1/2023 1:35:00 PM

WoW! Lasaad, Thank you so much for leaving such a wonderful review and comment. I appreciate your support l:-)Alexis