Elevated Thoughts

The little imp bawled lustily
as it lay in its perambulator
there by the water fountain
in a secluded garden
right in the middle of a concrete jungle,
disturbing my elevated thoughts
that churned and churned inside my mind
on how to kill those pesky flies
that infested my rundown abode.
 
It was no use for me
to kick any brilliant idea around,
so long as that pesky brat
disturbed the silence all around.
Why even the doves stopped cooing
and other birds stopped chirping,
whilst most decided that 'twas best
to search for a quieter place.
 
So I walked up to his comely nurse
sitting contentedly on a bench
and scratching my unshaven face
I quite politely asked
why the little cherub cry so much!
 
She looked me up and down
and down and up, no doubt
disgusted by what she discerned.
"Maybe he's seeing a devil,"
she replied, cooing at the cherub
that made its bright new pram
quiver with yelping wails.
 
"Or maybe he's thirsty,"
scathingly I replied.
Cherub my foot, I thought.
And sighing I slowly repaired
back to my solitary bench
and thought and thought on
how I could kill those parasites
that bothered me as much
as that little cherub in the pram.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Proxenos Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 11:03 AM
City life spread further and further into our quiet green places, and going somewhere too quiet nowadays is risky, so it looks like we have to put up with wailing cherubs but definitely must find a way to swat those pesky flies. Great presence in this write - a quick look into life. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Crabtree Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 2:29 PM
Back to read this one again, Victor. Great write! :)
Roper Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 9:05 AM
I love being around areas that are private , but sometimes it is dangerous.
Fowler Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 7:00 AM
Too pests competing for your attention Victor. LOL And so it happens all too frequently in shared green spaces. Linda
Theraven Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 7:56 PM
Victor, The presence brought to this poem is so palpable. Very well done. -Richard
Buehler Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:47 PM
Quiet places are so scarce in the city. Your great poem presents an interesting slice of city life. :)
Downing  Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:25 PM
Kinda funny but how that must be very annoying. Good one, Vic :)
Crabtree Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:32 PM
Great story, Victor. The cherub wouldn't bother me, but I hate flies to :)
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 1:34 PM
what an annoying combination! love your story telling victor:-) hugs jan xx
Gilmour Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 1:28 PM
When you visit a most beautful and peaceful place the last thing you need is a screaming imp or pesky flies, haha... Enjoyable read dear Victor. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 12:20 PM
- Everyone needs attention ... children as adults ... flies are another problem ... "Hang up a transparent bag of water in the area where the flies are staying. Effective effect against unwanted flies." - A great poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 9:04 AM
Sunshine, I've heard of placing a clear plastic bag filled with water: I have done that in the pest, but not sure if it really worked. I will do it again
Cunningham Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 11:32 AM
Screaming kids and annoying flies, what a combo. Enjoy your weekend Victor. Tom
Pandit Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 10:35 AM
No peace it seems when deep in thoughts--caught between pesky flies and pesky brat. Great story telling as always Victor.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 7:33 AM
Of course this must be you writing!!!:))Great. Hope ur doing fine. Soon more will come from. Exam is going;) Hugs SunitaUPD :D
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