Elegy For a Sandwich Shop

Broken bottles glitter on the swollen concrete before 
the door.
His smiling face in fractals of the glass window.
His counter, sun-wrecked and water stained hold his
familiar hands.
The floor is caked in ochre footsteps of  those who
came out of the rain before me.
Vaulted ceilings of ashen metal blow artificial air
upon my midsummer neck
The gray veins of each aisle beckon me home
Smells of fresh baked bread permeate the thick, wet
air and come to rest, steadfast, in my nose
Mohammed’s communal voice starts to sing
and static begins to crackle
The store itself drenched in scents of brief understanding
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goff Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Sounds like fallout from 2020 blast in Beirut Corey...devastation unparalleled & under reported in the West for sure...nice work!
Rolland Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 6:09 PM
I love very much the "Idea" of the poem, lovely reading yann
Bryan Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Thank you so much! I really appreciate that : )
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