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Elegy For a Sandwich Shop

Broken bottles glitter on the swollen concrete before the door. His smiling face in fractals of the glass window. His counter, sun-wrecked and water stained hold his familiar hands. The floor is caked in ochre footsteps of those who came out of the rain before me. Vaulted ceilings of ashen metal blow artificial air upon my midsummer neck The gray veins of each aisle beckon me home Smells of fresh baked bread permeate the thick, wet air and come to rest, steadfast, in my nose Mohammed’s communal voice starts to sing and static begins to crackle The store itself drenched in scents of brief understanding

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Date: 2/21/2023 10:41:00 PM
Great concept Corey. Very dreamscape or trip vibe where things come into focus as you walk forward and distort making the view more clear or less clear - are you seeing the truth or in a state of confusion - leaves you questioning. I'm sure this one can be brilliant by final version. It reminds me of when I go on the London tube and the warm air blows over me and feels reminiscent of memories I'm unable to access.
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Date: 2/21/2023 7:12:00 PM
Sounds like fallout from 2020 blast in Beirut Corey...devastation unparalleled & under reported in the West for sure...nice work!
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Date: 2/21/2023 6:09:00 PM
I love very much the "Idea" of the poem, lovely reading yann
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Corey Bryan
Date: 2/21/2023 7:08:00 PM
Thank you so much! I really appreciate that : )

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