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Elegy

Christmas Eve; mired in her melancholy, wrapped in present reveries that she alone may open, though there'll be no new surprises, only loss, and somber songs to accompany the pictures of her son; (forsaken by the light she's not quite ready for exposure.) Crows squawk a chorus in a leaden sky and there's a sprinkling of snow as mourners cluster black and white like so many stoic penguins round the gaping wound of earth. The box so tragically small reverberates, sealing the fate of one taken too early from the fight. Well-wishers scatter to their cars, start up their cell phones, return to Saturdays spent manicuring lawns and custom fingernails. Bereft of a daily blueprint, her aching loss too new for time to render any pleasure, still she has her novels and her neighbors, her crosswords and her cat but a pain deep in her heart for which there is no measure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/15/2009 11:19:00 AM
Dear Keith, as always, brilliant images. To quote Pres. Clinton, "I feel your pain." As for your comments on "On the Crest," you flatter me so! Wish I could figure out how to use soupmail. Do you have to be a premium member? Carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2009 4:16:00 PM
Keith, this one touches me so deeply. Nothings seems worse to me than losing a child. Some of those close to me have experienced it, and are changed forever. Thank you for this beautifully poignant piece. Blessings, Donna G.
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Date: 1/24/2009 11:47:00 AM
A touching, poignant and heartfelt write. The words you chose to express and forward your emotions were filled with sincerity and a calmed visceral edge. A brilliant ode of quieted emotions. Wishing you all the best in 2009! Peace always, John
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Date: 1/18/2009 5:21:00 PM
Keith I remember going grocery shopping after a death in the family. Everyone in the grocery going along like everything was normal, and nothing was normal. Very touching write. Laurie
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Date: 1/18/2009 5:05:00 PM
So sad, this touches my heart very deepy, Keith. A loss is sad and painful but when it is a child, as you penned so tenderly, "there is no measure" for that pain. Faith and time helped me when I lost my baby. It still hurts at times but it is bearable. A tender write, my friend, about one of the sadder facts of life. Love and hugs, Robin
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Date: 1/18/2009 4:20:00 PM
Whew, your on a rool today..this is so painful ..so well written. BG
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Date: 1/18/2009 2:31:00 PM
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