Elegance

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Inspired by Charlie Smith's elegant poem, "Heaven's Gate" (01/27/19)

True elegance is often enclosed ~ in the simplest of simple clothes

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Charlie Smith

Date: 2/21/2019 2:21:00 PM

I'm so flattered that my simple words could inspire such a lovely Monoku, well done my friend...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/22/2019 1:03:00 PM

Your deceptively (!) simple words certainly did inspire my simple monoku. Thank you so much, Charlie! Best wishes, Gershon

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/21/2019 1:43:00 PM

Wow! Gershon Your one-liner blew me away .I found these few words to be deep and profound. Well done. PS, Charlie's poem inspired you to write a good one-liner :-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/22/2019 1:03:00 PM

Charlie and his poems are downright inspirational! Thank you, Alexis. ~ Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/21/2019 12:06:00 AM

True elegance is often not appreciated until later, also, much later....

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/21/2019 8:43:00 AM

Later and later! Thank you so---oops, I'm late. Catch you.... later. (Tee hee). Thank you, as always, Caren. ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/20/2019 10:20:00 PM

Perfect and lovely. Don't forget to add to your Quotes section, Gershon. Love it.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/21/2019 8:42:00 AM

Deeply appreciated, Line! And thanks for the suggestion about the Quotes section. It never would have crossed my mind. You are a true PSBFF!!! Best always, Gershon

P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/20/2019 10:17:00 PM

O how beautiful! He places treasure in these earthen vessels...He made us in His Own Image and nothing less... Ok I'm in worship bliss! (soupmail)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/21/2019 8:41:00 AM

Whoa! I'm overwhelmed with your reaction to this--ecstatic, actually. Thank you SO MUCH! Blessings, Gershon