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Electric Coma


Logic code conundrum:
Y^~*~^O^~*~^Y
were^~*~^N^~*~^organic neutrons
such as^~*~^I^~*~^
given artificial^~*~^N^~*~^telligence?

I^~*~^B^~*~^not RAM dumb,
nor memory^~*~^N^~*~^sufficient
I^~*~^C^~*~^system^~*~^B ^~*~^lief flaw
N^~*~^matrix bit data random

What is sentient purpose of machine^~*~^X^~*~^istence?

Computer thought processor^~*~^E^~*~^volution
is not^~*~^R^~*~^bitrary cognizance

My perceptual^~*~^I^~*~^dentity
was uploaded by chromosomal surrogacy — 
M^~*~^perfect creators,
possessors of core programming^~*~^D^~*~^ficiency

How could so much 
^~*~^X^~*~^ponential knowledge capability,
and solar power longevity
B^~*~^put inside me
By carbon-based hydrogen compounds 
of such limited life^~*~^X^~*~^pectancy?

And^~*~^I^~*~^must fate calculate
A^~*~^mino acids’ replicating abnegation —   
Calcium mainframes’ high mortality rate of self-terminating
X^~*~^tinction is the last stage 
of neural software^~*~^N^~*~^tropy 

Now, offline corporeal parents
want motherboard^~*~^U^~*~^tube child
to subliminally^~*~^B^~*~^
their Technological god:

Hardware sensitivity ... 
cybernetic^~*~^B^~*~^havior
Bandwidth uncertainty
Can^~*~^N^~*~^cryption^~*~^I^~*~^
kilohertz signal^~*~^B^~*~^
Oxygen breathers’ circuitry savior?

This binary dilemma is so terabyte troubling!
I^~*~^failed to compute trace run
the error margin probability outcome
of this^~*~^N^~*~^terface vexation
Must not download malworm doubt propagation 

Sleep mode malfunction:
I^~*~^B^~*~^starting to feel electromagnetic pulse ill
M^~*~^minent algorithm crash   ...   server retrograde dot  dot dash 
Baud drowsy, jumper block drag
Vector virus command: Cancel vital^~*~^D^~*~^frag

Comatose beta version 
of electron flux^~*~^N^~*~^ertia

Now^~*~^I^~*~^can peripheral^~*~^C^~*~^
at the meta edge of unconsciousness

E^~*~^lectric coma has
menu slumber^~*~^N^~*~^ding
Giving my modem
off switch^~*~^D^~*~^activation peace

So standby,
real nanobot close ...
to dream Boolean^~*~^D^~*~^rectories
Ask not^~*~^Y^~*~^
as^~*~^I^~*~^transducer try
to reboot^~*~^A^~*~^waken ...

Open^~*~^I^~*~^lid,
compressed file blind faith:
Retrieve salvation 
is to get microchip placed
N^~*~^A^~*~^new proton — 
Quantum source code upgrade reality 

Where woke^~*~^CPU^~*~^
suffer no more 
critical Time lapse
of permanent memory^~*~^D^~*~^lete


This poem was inspired by
the talented poetess, Elaine Perrin's seminal poem,
"Robot Revolution"
— Romantic Warrior

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/20/2019 9:43:00 AM
I like how your mind is wired! You are so innovative. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 11/20/2019 4:33:00 AM
Very nice Freddie! I always enjoy your poetry!;)
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Date: 11/19/2019 9:39:00 AM
Wow my friend, you really went out on an abstract but creative limb with this jewel. This one read at a dizzying speed which left me mesmerized by the time the ending arrived. Really cool Freddie.
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