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Elated Meditation

She sat on a wooden pier in a yoga pose, Staring at a wide expanse of stormy bay. Salty foamy billows disturbed her not. A gull glided down, seeking some fish. She felt elated, full of bliss. No one disturbed her deep thoughts. A warm breeze caressed her. At last she stood up And with one move Jumped in the Chilly Sea.

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Date: 10/29/2022 6:10:00 AM
I am wondering now if she was a mermaid or a person. LOL..Enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/11/2020 7:14:00 PM
What bliss this Victor? I'm sure that 'chilly seas' were too cold for her to survive. Chilling indeed, and beautifully penned. Linda
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Date: 10/6/2020 2:03:00 PM
I love this little scene you portrayed in the etheree style. it's so fitting for a poem like this.
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Date: 10/5/2020 9:19:00 AM
A very peaceful scene indeed. I love the way you have expressed it here. :)
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Date: 10/4/2020 4:24:00 AM
Such tranquil imagery Victor, I could see her so clearly ~ it was beautiful... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 10/3/2020 8:54:00 AM
Very clever and "different." I enjoyed it very much!
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Date: 10/1/2020 8:24:00 PM
Great imagery and feel. hugs eve
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Date: 10/1/2020 12:43:00 PM
Beautiful Etheree Victor, Best wishes
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Date: 10/1/2020 1:51:00 AM
What a serene and blissful state! How we crave for being in such a trance when getting untethered of the soul! Your rendition is so vivid and powerful! As always, Victor! You have a genuine touch with words! So pleased to read! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/1/2020 2:14:00 AM
Blessings for such wonderful comment. ~~
Date: 10/1/2020 12:16:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, Victor:) beautifully penned:)
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Date: 9/30/2020 10:18:00 PM
Your poem evokes such peace and serenity, along with the sheer enjoyment of nature. Beautiful, and a fave for me. :)
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Date: 9/30/2020 12:11:00 PM
- A peaceful place for thoughts ... I go to the sea almost every day ... but, cold wind and many seagulls looking for fish ... and taste of salt on my lips - Love it, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2020 8:25:00 AM
It's wonderful how nature has such a positive effect on us. I loved this write. You're awesome! Peace, Angie
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Date: 9/30/2020 5:42:00 AM
I can see the images in your words. You painted the moments beautifully, Victor. Excellent, as always.
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Date: 9/30/2020 1:18:00 AM
Love the imagery, could just see her in lotus position at total peace. Tom
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