Victor Buhagiar Poet Etheree

Elated Meditation

She sat on a wooden pier in a yoga pose, 
Staring at a wide expanse of stormy bay. 
Salty foamy billows disturbed her not. 
A gull glided down, seeking some fish. 
She felt elated, full of bliss. 
No one disturbed her deep thoughts. 
A warm breeze caressed her. 
At last she stood up 
And with one move 
Jumped in the
 Chilly 
Sea. 

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Sara Kendrick October 29, 2022 at 6:10 AM I am wondering now if she was a mermaid or a person. LOL..Enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler October 11, 2020 at 7:14 PM What bliss this Victor? I'm sure that 'chilly seas' were too cold for her to survive. Chilling indeed, and beautifully penned. Linda

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2020 at 2:03 PM I love this little scene you portrayed in the etheree style. it's so fitting for a poem like this.

Angela Crabtree October 5, 2020 at 9:19 AM A very peaceful scene indeed. I love the way you have expressed it here. :)

Ann Gilmour October 4, 2020 at 4:24 AM Such tranquil imagery Victor, I could see her so clearly ~ it was beautiful... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sunlite Wanter October 3, 2020 at 8:54 AM Very clever and "different." I enjoyed it very much!

Eve Roper October 1, 2020 at 8:24 PM Great imagery and feel. hugs eve

Joseph May October 1, 2020 at 12:43 PM Beautiful Etheree Victor, Best wishes

Besma Riabi Dziri October 1, 2020 at 1:51 AM What a serene and blissful state! How we crave for being in such a trance when getting untethered of the soul! Your rendition is so vivid and powerful! As always, Victor! You have a genuine touch with words! So pleased to read! My deepest regards and blessings. Victor Buhagiar October 1, 2020 at 2:14 AM Blessings for such wonderful comment. ~~

Joanna Daniel October 1, 2020 at 12:16 AM Wonderful imagery, Victor:) beautifully penned:)

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 30, 2020 at 10:18 PM Your poem evokes such peace and serenity, along with the sheer enjoyment of nature. Beautiful, and a fave for me. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2020 at 12:11 PM - A peaceful place for thoughts ... I go to the sea almost every day ... but, cold wind and many seagulls looking for fish ... and taste of salt on my lips - Love it, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angela Crabtree September 30, 2020 at 8:25 AM It's wonderful how nature has such a positive effect on us. I loved this write. You're awesome! Peace, Angie

Vijay Pandit September 30, 2020 at 5:42 AM I can see the images in your words. You painted the moments beautifully, Victor. Excellent, as always.

Tom Cunningham September 30, 2020 at 1:18 AM Love the imagery, could just see her in lotus position at total peace. Tom