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They sit~ not as muses, but as morning light caught in linen~ one leaning gently into the other’s calm, as if sisterhood were a soft hush between breaths. The elder holds a silence far beyond her years, her fingers a quiet shield over the other’s fluttering world. She is stillness, composed, watchful~ a portrait of care before language names it. The younger rests wide-eyed, soul blooming, a child who doesn’t yet know what it means to be seen. In her gaze, a question, in her posture, a trust only the very young can wear. Their hair is a spiral of a notebook, loose thoughts escaping the brush, stories curling behind ears too small for the weight their father’s love will leave behind. He painted them not to capture, but to remember~ not daughters, but moments: the lean of a head, the hush of a room, the pause before childhood folds itself away.

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Date: 5/12/2025 7:15:00 AM
Dear JCB, What a wonderful luminous portrait-two sisters, not as muses, but as morning light, their bond a hush between breaths. I loved how you captured the elder’s silent strength and the younger’s blooming trust for it feels both timeless and achingly tender, like a memory painted to last beyond words. Love lingers in small gestures, and how presence and not just kinship-makes us family. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/11/2025 11:13:00 AM
An ekraphsis sparks with insightful light without meandering. I enjoyed both poetry and painting, beautifully done Jcb!, i think it's Thomas Gainsborough ~xhugs
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Date: 5/12/2025 4:14:00 AM
Thank you Anaya, I'll try that way. ^__^
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Date: 5/11/2025 2:28:00 PM
I recognized the faces "Blue Boy" looks like them. You are correct about that, it takes a few searches, here is a secret if you right click on the image above then scroll down to web search it helps! There is The daughters With A Cat as well! :D
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Date: 5/11/2025 1:14:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya... You're absolutely right! I was confused while searching for the "The Daughters Catching Butterflies " and I saw this one instead for the first time, I got the wrong information. I already made a footle on the chasing butterflies so I opted for this painting . ^___^

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