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Ekphrasis on The Godfather's Theme

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For Brian Strand's Your Choice u Poetry Contest

7 June 2025
Upon watching "The Godfather's Theme" with Andrei Rieu on violin.

 


midst silents screams of strings
his hands weave~
an ornate oratorio palace
built from celestial hands

And when the final notes fade
like the last glimmer
of a midnight lamp
the silence glows.


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Date: 6/10/2025 5:54:00 AM
Wow, you should enter this one for Brian. It's really good.
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Date: 6/10/2025 6:34:00 AM
I did...it got 8th place I guess.

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