Ekphrasis on The Godfather's Theme
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For Brian Strand's Your Choice u Poetry Contest
7 June 2025
Upon watching "The Godfather's Theme" with Andrei Rieu on violin.
In shadow, he stands~
not as a man but as an echo;
His bow,a ladder to unknown sanctuary;
In his hand, draws breath of strings
like a promise made before birth.
The first note is not played~
It is adrift.
Low and slow, as if mourning something
not yet lost
but already grieved.
Andrei does not memorise
He remembers.
Each motion of his wrist
a love letter to heaven
The violin screams without voice
a single thread unraveling
from the sleeve of Sicilian suit.
The trumphets weep next~
not in Bravado,
but in reverence.
Andrei breathes through it all
his fingers shaping the ache
into architecture~
an ornate oratorio palace
built from celestial hands
And when the final notes fade
like the last glimmer
of a midnight lamp
the silence glows.
Copyright © JCB Brul | Year Posted 2025
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