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For Brian Strand's Your Choice u Poetry Contest

7 June 2025
Upon watching "The Godfather's Theme" with Andrei Rieu on violin.

 

In shadow, he stands~ not as a man but as an echo; His bow,a ladder to unknown sanctuary; In his hand, draws breath of strings like a promise made before birth. The first note is not played~ It is adrift. Low and slow, as if mourning something not yet lost but already grieved. Andrei does not memorise He remembers. Each motion of his wrist a love letter to heaven The violin screams without voice a single thread unraveling from the sleeve of Sicilian suit. The trumphets weep next~ not in Bravado, but in reverence. Andrei breathes through it all his fingers shaping the ache into architecture~ an ornate oratorio palace built from celestial hands And when the final notes fade like the last glimmer of a midnight lamp the silence glows.

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Date: 6/10/2025 5:54:00 AM
Wow, you should enter this one for Brian. It's really good.
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Date: 6/10/2025 6:34:00 AM
I did...it got 8th place I guess.

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