Eileen

Eileen: (A Dream That's Not What It Seems)

I met Eileen inside a dream
Chasing me down a mountain -
Immeasurably old and made of gold 
Pouring forth like water from fountains.

Her beauty was rare as angel’s hair 
Visible to sentient beings –
She spoke not a word and yet I heard 
Her whisper, “I know what you’re seeing.”

She followed me ‘round and all the way down 
That mountainous, slippery slope – 
Inside of me, all around me  
Giving courage, strength and hope.  

That the fall I was feeling, spinning and reeling       
And lucid as the day is long – 
Would pass in a flash straight into the past
And the future in one sweet song. 

She told me my names and all of the games 
I’ve played since my inception – 
Back in the times when love was divine
And darkness was pure perfection.         

We crossed a river wide and deep 
In a valley far below – 
Where cities, towns and people appeared 
Many of whom I’ve known.

I saw their struggles, pains and troubles
Laughed and cried their tears – 
Living again as family and friends
In other times and years.

She took me north, east, south and west
By way of an ocean breeze – 
By ship and train, by horse and plane 
Where I’ve never felt so free.     

In time and space where there’s a place 
We rendezvous in travels – 
Between this world we’re living in 
And others yet unraveled.    

Until she placed my head upon her heart  
While cradled in fetal position –
Resting well deep in her spell 
Until this world became my vision.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/24/2014 11:20:00 AM
This is a lovely and compelling poem, Terrell. Dreams enable us to travel far and wide. I too believe that there is more in dreams than meets the eye/mind. #7 rating for you. // paul
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Date: 11/22/2014 5:55:00 PM
Dream travel -- it's the best way to see new worlds, enjoyed your poem.
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Terrell Martin
Date: 11/22/2014 7:13:00 PM
David, Thank you for reading/commenting. I've recently begin to pay more attention to dreams and their multi-dimensional levels of awareness and consciousness. I'm hardly an expert on the subject but do believe dreams pay a much more important role in our lives than we tend to realize. Glad you enjoyed and thanks again. Terry
Date: 11/22/2014 5:22:00 PM
Very amazing poem Terrell! What an adventurous journey with her it must be for you.lol A 7 for me! :) Love and light! xxxx D.
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Terrell Martin
Date: 11/22/2014 7:15:00 PM
WOW - thanks for the 7 Dorian but Eileen is nothing more than a figment of my imagination. Or maybe we have met somewhere or when and I just don't recall? No matter...glad you enjoyed and thanks for posting. I owe U a visit soon my dear:) Terry
Date: 11/22/2014 4:58:00 PM
This is an interesting write...This Eileen must be something else. She carries my name, or I hers. Welcome to the Soup.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/23/2014 12:24:00 AM
Eileen means a great light. Obvious she has shone some light on your dream....
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Terrell Martin
Date: 11/22/2014 7:24:00 PM
Never met her other than in the dream...she's nothing more than smoke and mirrors from my imagination or could she be a distant memory from a LONG AGO past? Hmmm...I wonder how far does our past really go ?:)?:) Cheerios, Terry
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