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Eighty-Four Candles

Hell is awaiting, it's closing in on me No more birthday cakes which set fire to trees Eighty-four candles Leaves forests in shambles But in spite of it all, I still sing when I pee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/27/2019 12:01:00 PM
Soon soon! <3 Just popping in for quick smooches. Hugs and a spectacular day my dear Jack! xomo
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/27/2019 12:17:00 PM
PHEW!!! Almost flipped my flipper! I'm okay now though! OOOEEEE!!!! And a spectacular day to you my sweet love, hugs, cyber kisses, and humongous heavy breathing! Happy Jack XOXOX
Date: 6/27/2019 6:43:00 AM
Can you blow them all out at once?. Good day Jack.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/27/2019 7:05:00 AM
Ae you kidding??? Not a chance! LOL, Not enough blow stuff! Good day, my dear friend!

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