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Eighty-Four Candles

Hell is awaiting, it's closing in on me No more birthday cakes which set fire to trees Eighty-four candles Leave the forest in shambles But in spite of it all, I still sing when I pee

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/1/2019 2:04:00 PM

Thought I'd missed it , so you having a big party in august.topless waitresses the works lol.

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/1/2019 2:30:00 PM

HOLY SHIT! Yes of course, still got a strong ticker!!! But never knows does one!!! CHEERS!!!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/1/2019 12:34:00 PM

Hello Happy Jack,as i read this poem i had a good chuckle. have a nice day my friend. xxxxxx-x0000000.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/2/2019 5:30:00 PM

Hello happy jack, i will keep on chuckling. Have a nice evening my friend.xxxx-oooo.

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/1/2019 1:42:00 PM

Keep chuckling dear Darling!!! XOXOX

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/1/2019 8:30:00 AM

Howling at Jan's response... Jealous I didn't think of it ;o*

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/1/2019 1:40:00 PM

Seems like Jan might become one of us!!! OOOOEEEE! Love, HJ XOXOX

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2019 7:45:00 AM

lol of course you could always pee on the cake and put the candles out Jack lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/1/2019 1:39:00 PM

I'm trying to be serious here ladies!!! You guys are a hoot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love and kisses (nothing personal!) Happy Jack XOXOX

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/1/2019 8:30:00 AM

LOL! ;D