Jeremy Smith Poet Free verse

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The HORDE of WIZENED old men like to LOITER
Around the supermarket parking lot to amusingly watch
The young mothers SHACKLED to their MORDACIOUS babies
While the mothers did not find it very TRIFLE
However it did ELICIT the attention of the store manager
Who arrived carrying a box with one ink CARTRIDGE
                                             
3/23/17

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John Hamilton April 10, 2017 at 10:42 AM Free verse it is!

John Hamilton April 9, 2017 at 1:12 PM This is good Jeremy, you may need to check your formatting, when you sent it to my contest the poem was somehow cut into two sections, and I couldn't make sense of it, sorry.

Cheryl Hoffman March 23, 2017 at 8:02 AM My niece breastfed her baby while at a swimming pool and no one said or took any pictures, thank God! Interesting write Jeremy!~Che :)