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The HORDE of WIZENED old men like to LOITER Around the supermarket parking lot to amusingly watch The young mothers SHACKLED to their MORDACIOUS babies While the mothers did not find it very TRIFLE However it did ELICIT the attention of the store manager Who arrived carrying a box with one ink CARTRIDGE
3/23/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/10/2017 10:42:00 AM
Free verse it is!
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Date: 4/9/2017 1:12:00 PM
This is good Jeremy, you may need to check your formatting, when you sent it to my contest the poem was somehow cut into two sections, and I couldn't make sense of it, sorry.
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Date: 3/23/2017 8:02:00 AM
My niece breastfed her baby while at a swimming pool and no one said or took any pictures, thank God! Interesting write Jeremy!~Che :)
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