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Ego's Trip

Bygones, a canope on progress' menu,cast - or merely,an afterglow of our past ?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/21/2009 3:53:00 PM
intense, immersible in my mind....nice!... jim
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Date: 10/21/2009 3:12:00 PM
Both! I would say. I recieved 'Retrospective' today. What a delight!. I will be reading it thoroughly tonight. "Life is like licking honey from a thorn." I came to that same conclusion when I wrote 'The Rose and the Thorn'. I continue to learn. Thank you for all that you do to expand my knowledge and love of this art form. Elaine
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Date: 10/21/2009 9:44:00 AM
Deep thoughts.. The past can influence our future... excellent job! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/21/2009 7:20:00 AM
Awesome write Brian....:JP]
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Date: 10/21/2009 6:17:00 AM
Brian .. luv this verse... such a poignant piece of poetry ... reflective moments... Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/21/2009 4:17:00 AM
Cleverly named and presented , Cinquain ... Perhaps some of our rugby lads , have been on this bus and menu ?? ( early bird special ) ...
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