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Stonehenge is one of my special places – I could spends hours just walking around looking at this site.  So in celebration of the winter solstice I wrote this poem.

 

A little background:  “according to many archaeological experts, the winter solstice was the more significant of the two solstices. This year the winter solstice is on December 22nd.  Archaeological evidence discovered around the Stonehenge landscape, points to great feasts and celebrations that would have occurred at this special time of year. In the Bronze age, this was a time when clans would slay cows, finish fermenting their wine, and mark the start of a new year.”

 

Archaeologists are still finding many more discoveries about this site .  .  .  so many secrets . . .

Egnehenots – of earth and stone Chief elder – most wise upon the Salisbury Plain an old man . . . loved deeply revered father of the land wakes before the sunrise speaks with a clear wind voice it is time . . . retniw ecitslos The twelve bow . . . form together three to a side lift Otsego – clear water running high in the air in liturgical movements move across the dark plain whitlow grass . . . juniper shrubs . . . wild thyme . . . sweeten the air moss laden stones soft upon leather-bound feet Within the wind haunting cries of the stone curlew crested newts scramble for cover the great bustard cuts the air with powerful wing beats Ancient burial mounds appear a sacred circle of life emergences the procession stops . . . lowers Egnehenots steps down, blesses the twelve enters the holy inner circle alone Laying his head against the mighty sarsens begins to chant . . . father of the blue stones creator of the big sky light upon these rocks I cling for your life from sky, to earth let your love flow On this holy day your strength is once again revealed wind and rain obey your commands days, nights, seasons march to your song how great and mighty is your power Hear our cries upon the wind absorb our tears upon the earth our breath upon your mighty rocks be now amongst your people send forth the sun and rain let the earth bring forth its riches so that we may dance in your radiance The sun breaks the horizon Sending out shafts of lights streaking across the sky clouds turning purple then into shades of reds, oranges a single ray of light strikes forth straight as an arrow illuminating the altar stone connecting slaughter stone and finally . . . the heel stone Where Where, an old man clings A loud cheer explodes from the village Food and wind flow – a celebration A new year begins - Rain clouds appear in the west Egnehenots – of earth and stone Love Generously David Meade 12/8/2015

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Date: 11/4/2016 12:47:00 PM
I miss you David. Love always armand.
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Date: 10/26/2016 4:47:00 AM
greeat to read you again, david.. this is a fascinating piece ; i too am enthralled by the mystic feel of stonehenge..huggs
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Date: 2/24/2016 3:52:00 PM
amazing poetry, and the story it tells..
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Date: 1/29/2016 8:45:00 AM
You put a lot of thought into this piece. I quite enjoyed the resulting piece. Thanks as well for the historical perspective above the poem.
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Date: 1/20/2016 9:13:00 PM
wow, David, how did I miss THIS one. It's the last one posted and I really like it. now get to another one!!!
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Date: 1/20/2016 10:06:00 AM
Beautifully captured scenes and sentiments, David. I wonder how I could have missed this. Thank you for sharing. I feel like I've witnessed and heard their thoughts...:-)
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Date: 1/19/2016 11:57:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem David, I am hoping to soon spend some time in the Scottish Isles just for a change of pace and to write!
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Date: 12/31/2015 4:41:00 PM
Very atmospheric, David...Just like the ancient henge itself. You have captured the mood perfectly! My very best regards for the New Year...Cheers! :-) john
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Date: 12/19/2015 9:59:00 AM
Tremendous poem my friend. Earth is covered with sites where man sought to connect to god and/or Nature. Likely thousands buried , never to be found. Fav'ing this great poem as it is truly, epically good. A7
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Date: 12/19/2015 5:14:00 AM
A masterpiece of a poem detailing the ancient's beliefs and celebrations in a brilliantly poetic explosion, dear David! Merry Christmas my friend!
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Date: 12/18/2015 11:44:00 AM
- A truly wonderful poem, David - Thanks :) - a 7 + - I wish you and your family a beautiful, happy Christmas and a peaceful new year 2016 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/9/2015 1:08:00 PM
You are so special David of course this is a fav. For your information you have just given me strength when I thought I had none left. The universe works in mysterious ways. Thank you for your words. I am honoured to call you friend David. Lots of Love Always Armand.
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Date: 12/9/2015 2:01:00 AM
Your love for this sacred site shines bright David. A true expression of brilliance! All of this interests me greatly. I love watching "America Unearthed" (an American T.V. program), and finding evidence of early Eurpean visitors and how they brought this knowledge of the importance of the soltice with them. I am making t h is a fave! #7
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Date: 12/8/2015 1:46:00 PM
So expressive and capably presented, David! The solstice beautifully described. The Megalithic Temples of Malta, notably Hagar Qim, Mnajdra, Ggantija, are among the most ancient religious sites on earth, ca 5,600 years old. Thus they're even older than Stonehenge! They will be well worth a visit, my friend! ~ All the best. // paul
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Date: 12/8/2015 12:47:00 PM
you have a detailed and full grasp of this place; it's on my bucket list, dave... sensational write with much to delight on!..huggs
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