Effort

EFFORT Despite of all of our best effort We can not get through this cruel desert Life always has one shepherd To tame the fiercest leopard Tr?n Minh Hi?n Hien Tran Orlando April 10, 2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 1:19:00 PM

Hien,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Hien Tran
Date: 4/10/2016 1:24:00 PM

Thank you so much for your warm and kind welcome. I love poetry and I write a lot poems in Vietnamese and also try to write in English to express my feelings. Thank you so much everything here. I would like to receive constructing criticism also. I will read your poems and let you know what I feel. Thank you so much.