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Image result for pictures of a variety of southern American birds at bird feederHousefinch pair. 

Eerie Morn Out on the Playporch

There's an eerie feel to the air A sign of impending storm All is quieter, still, Until the birds' row begin to form The bird's row on the garden fence Wanting their turn to feed Of those seeds, which magically appear. The poet's bi-weekly good deed Species of all types come by Some fight to get a share Brown-headed cowbird, doves Cardinals, house finches eat the fare. One Dove dives behind the fence post Hidden away from his mate. She chases him out into view Seems little food his fate. Then all is still again out there. As I look through a dirty pane, I wonder how I'll survive When life is so uncertain again. Then a brown thrasher flies in He is eating from my seed. I think how lovely he is I'm thankful I can give him feed
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Kerr Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 10:39 PM
I love the detail in this rhyme and the atmosphere created A philosophical thread and mystery in the background I also find appealing, Sara. 🔥🔥 Howard
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 4:38 AM
Why, thank you, Howard. I haven't felt up to putting the food out this year. Morning glories have taken over the fencing and have overrun everything in my little garden. Age is taking its toll. Your visit is uplifting and encouraging. Sara K. 👍⭐
Horne Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 7:57 AM
lovely inspiring piece of porch observation
Kendrick Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 8:26 AM
Thank you, Jack. I appreciate the visit especially under the circumstances. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 11:20 AM
Your love for birds is apparent! So many lovely kinds…
Kendrick Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 1:52 PM
Thank you, Kim. I do enjoy seeing them at the bird feeders and at the flowers that I have had in the past out in my yard and garden. Your visit is empowering. Sara K
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