Edna

What better name for one who'd analyze
and scrutinize the sources of logomachy, 
a philosopher who filters truth from lies,
our building blocks, the seat of etiology. 
A thinker's thinker, one who ponders well
the implications of a life-long gleaning,
composed of and comprises, just a single cell
in her journey to examine every meaning.
Though new expressions find their way to dictionaries,
they bastardize, dilute the power of language,
'snuck' instead of 'sneaked,' no real propensities
to offer something better, (tawdry verbiage!)
    To communicate with skill, singular fluency
    takes savoir faire, a knack for etymology.

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...meant as a love sonnet to a dear friend.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hicks Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 11:04 PM
And "who would have thought" instead of "who would have thunk" ... Oxford doesn't have the last word! This sure was delightful wordplay, Keith, mixed with some rather original thoughts. You had me scratching my head at "logomachy" ... perhaps I ought to consult this eDNA about the etymology.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Edna is a close friend of mind... an intelligent and well educated lady! Thanks for your cool review. Best wishes, Keith
Onclaud Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 5:43 PM
you have a way with words--unique and persuasive... a poetic language all on its own style, keith..huggs
G. Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Another epic poem! I'm extremely fond of your wording, as well as your boundless intelligence in your work. Although I Google'd a few words (because who knows what a logomachy is?! lol), but the inspiration your work gives me is astounding. ~Phil Tyler
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 2:38 PM
It's like I swallowed a dictionary, huh?! Glad you liked it... best wishes, Keith
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Poems like this that contain body and wit are the joys of reading your work Keith. Now days kids like making up their own language which may seem to lack common sense, such as using the word bad for good. Surely one could come up wi t h something more creative than that, such as Colorfication...now there is a creative word! Lol. I loved this intelligent offering Keith. Bravo! #7
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 11:54 AM
I little different... Thanks so much Connie! Best wishes, Keith
Bauer Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 2:53 PM
wow! talk about the power of language, keith! bravo to you - i'm sure edna loved it, too...
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Kinda like I swallowed a dictionary huh?! Oh well... Thanks so much! Keith
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