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Eden

Garden of Eden serpents lie shame, gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/5/2012 12:06:00 AM
Good short write, but I believe this is more of a "senryu" since it is based on a religious idea.
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Date: 4/2/2012 7:13:00 AM
Nice haiku . xx trying to mail you but i don't think you are accpeting mail. Can I ask you somthing about your family name? I think you can soup me if its ok to ask.xx
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Joseph May
Date: 4/2/2012 8:14:00 AM
thanks Mandy, you can soup mail me now if you wish... always....Joseph

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